Though I don’t think this will ever update, I thought I’d review as to let you know how much I enjoyed this story!
Honestly, it’s been fun. Thanks for writing this even if you left a cliffhanger.

I wait a new chapter, someday xD

Awesome. I've always liked Hatta more than Stayne, but you've somehow made me want Alice to end up qith Stayne. And you made me like Hamish, which, by the way, was actually pretty close to being- dare I say it- impossible. So, well done. Update soon!

My goodness! This is so wonderfully unique. Everyone is kept in character, but given rather sympathetic portrayals. I've been enjoying the points of view of the two Overlander men the best, Hamish in particular. Hamish is always that awkward one who doesn't know what's going on. At least Lowell has company in that respect. And the absolutely best part is it really seems that Hamish is shipping Tarrant/Alice while still trying to move on from his feelings for Alice. Stayne, though hasn't been too kind, and it'll be interesting to see if he can change that at all, Alice or not. And finally, whoa. The plot thickens with this recent development of Iracabeth and Mirana. Can't wait to see how this development along with four rather unsuspecting Overlanders in Underland fare.

I don't get it. Eventually Alice will be with Stayn eand NOT with Hatter? you are literally breaking my heart.

I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw your update. Thanks for not abandoning the story - take all the time you need, but finish it!

Oh my goodness! They've met up at last! I can't wait to see how this all plays out:)

I'm glad you're still putting up chapters as you get them done. It's a truly frabjous story;)

Oh ship...well, not the word I meant, but it fits too...

Enjoyed this! Can't wait to see where you go with this!

This story is wonderful and I love it! I can't stop reading it :) I hope you make more of it .

Nononononononono. ALICE HAS TO REMEMBER HATTER! THAT IS JUST NOT ACCEPTABLE!

Why is STAYNE here?! He shouldn't be here! He's EVIL...

Ooo I can't wait for the conversation in the next chapter. I wonder what everyone's reaction is goint to be when Alice comes back

My gosh! I believe it took me all of two days to get through this story! You really did a marvelous job, my friend. ;) It was a pleasure to read this story.
My only constructive criticism (I don't believe in destructive criticism) is this: Though I loved the way you described the various scenes and settings, I feel like you put quite a few parenthesis (plural?) in there. I found myself reading the story, and then becoming a little distracted from said story by all of the parenthesized paragraphs. Other than that, you rocked it. :D
Also, you mentioned in an A.N. that you were feeling depressed. I battle the same feeling quite a lot, so if you meant literal depression, and need to talk about it, I'd be more than happy to oblige. I know you don't know me, but I am open and willing. I am not a member of fanfiction, but I am a Quotev member.
May God bless you, my friend, wherever you go!

Good three chapters