SEQUEL!? EEEEE!

Going to look for it right now! I loved this story and I want more!
Again, minor typos, missing words and words that sound the same but are spelled the wrong way. Nothing that stopped me from enjoying the story. Good job, and now I go to seek the sequel!

My only two complaints about this entire story are that you are still spelling out zat'nik'tel past the point when we already know what they are really well. Once it's established that they are called zat'nik'tel, but everyone else refers to them as Zat guns or Zats, just call them that instead. Second thing, I noticed some repeated words, some missing words, and a few bits of odd phrasing. Having someone else, a real person, read your work before you publish it is a MUST when writing anything. Spelling and grammar checkers are nice, but they don't spot everything. Other than those two things, this story is GREAT and I love it.

YAY! More story!

First, I laughed so hard at the party member swap thing, that was hilarious. Love that Carter is hating magic hardcore, that is classic Carter. Daniel wanting to learn new languages and being open to the idea of magic is just SO Daniel, and needling Carter with it is just perfect SG-1. You are really good at writing the characters and keeping them accurate in their reactions. I've read other stories, and only one other story really captures their personality as well as you do.

Secondly, if you wrote stats for SG-1 equipment in D&D, would you be willing to share those with me?
Third, are you a Dungeon Master? Cause reading this, I would love to join a game of yours!

I think you really nailed O'Neil's verbal mannerisms here.

Lol nice. SG-1, doing what they do best, kicking ass and taking names with their new friends at their side. I haven't played the Neverwinter games, so I'll take your word for it, but it was still cool to read about their interactions and how events unfolded around them. They're adapting well, and I suspect, they're going to end up having a lot of debates regarding magic and science and why Sam won't believe a word of their talk of spirits, spells, and such until she sees her first demon from the Abyss or something lol.

In a way, that's not so unreasonable of an explanation Daniel, kinda clever in a way if completely wrong lol. As for the 'magical charges' bit, that was also kinda clever, and a bit more accurate in a way. Whatever helps to explain their respective magic and tech though so the other side understands what's going on. It's good, and you've done a rather clever job of explaining things so far along with what I've said already. I DO however hope they come up with a more permanent way to keep the translation bit working because as it stands now, there's gonna be a problem later I imagine lol.

Lol nice. At least they haven't lost their touch. SG-1 vs zombies and an evil necromantic priest, there's something I hadn't expected to see. Most necromancers are sorcerers, wizards, mages, but not priests. Nice touch in that sense Dragon, I'll give ya that. ; D I'm liking your group of DnD characters already by the way, although they haven't actually said anything exactly. They certainly work well enough together though. The way they dismantled the zombies and such proved that much on its own. Kinda reminds me of Drizzt and the Heroes of Mithral Hall oddly enough. Yes I'm a fan of R.A. Salvatore lol.

Well there's something you don't see everyday. As a huge fan of SG-1 and DnD in general, I'm pretty happy to see these two worlds brought together like this. Something about the premise seems oddly satisfying and the story hasn't even started persay. In typical SG-1 fashion though, the mission goes sideways almost as soon as they step through the gate, so to speak lol. No surprise with them though, and Jack's typical response to the briefing was also pretty much par for the course for the sarcastic man. He REALLY shouldn't have said anything about dying however, because one person on the team tends to get killed at least once a mission lol. And to make matters worse, the first thing Daniel see is a zombie trying to claw his face off. Nice going there doc. : P Joking aside, I'm curious to see where this ends up going. Keep it up!

Hmm, for some reason I've been reading Tamil as a female. I'm now assuming that the Druid's use of the term "Harborman" was referencing Tamil?

Loving the way you have continued to keep the SG-1 'feel'. I'm getting excited for the many many chapters ahead :)

This is getting interesting. I especially like how the SG-1 members seem to be themselves, and how their attempts at understanding seem genuine.

This was indeed a great story and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The only thing I remember as confusing was that you referred to Tamil as a female in the first few chapters then as a male in a few chapters then a female again for the rest of the story.

So far, while the premise looks good, this story is utterly boring you're just blandling telling us whats happening. Your english so far seems good and I can't remember any errors on that point. My main tip would be the classic show don't tell. Example "The technicians in the co troll roo

Interesting.