I don’t really see how someone like Naruto, such a powerful and skillful ninja is only 2 stars, This mofo breaks concrete with his fists, reacts at inhuman speeds, he’s fast as fuck boi, he can take a beating that would kill 10 men, has regeneration, can use ninja magic (chakra), can walk through anything, has a weapon extremely powerful that has multiple forms, etc. I don’t really see how he is anything less than 3. The only logical explanation I see is that because he didn’t show any of these abilities that didn’t realize how powerful he was.
Final question, I’ve notice that in most of your stories you ignore naruto’s brute strength. Why’s that. He is powerful enough to break cement with his fists yet in most stories you write he has human strength or little more. Besides all this I am liking very much this story.

Um. If the Shinigami wanted to have them have a better understanding if whiches and even not kill them wouldnt he remove the requirement for ones 100th soul?

So no healing factor since he has scars and cravings on him. At least not a good one.

I'm also very confused with Naruto repeatedly saying he for Kyuubi yet shinigami and Stein saying she. Not sure if they realize and he doesnt or it's just a strange mistake.

maybe I'm miss remembering but I dont think the shushin was teleportation. I thought it was just really high speed movement. if it were teleportation then it would make it a space-time technique which would make it way to hard for beginners to learn.

otherwise a nice chapter, better passing than the last one too.

I've only read the first chapter and I can tell this will be a great story I especially like the part with Kid, as soon as I read that Kid was in the same room as Naruto and he had 9 tails out Kid was going to make a scene lol I also thought that since Kurama is the Kyuubi that he would have 9 forms instead of 8 unless I miss counted?

Chrona is one of those character that you can't look at as anything but a girl despite all the yelling in your head that he is a boy.

Nice work

please update, this is a wonderful story I'm only on chapter one but I'm hooked on the plot and the idea of the story, would hate to see it unfinished and abandoned

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Continue please!

update pls

... I want my lemon...

Please update it's been around 5 years and I really love the story. So, please update...

This is sad sappy shit

When you first sentence doesn't have a period... you know your grammar is bad. I do hope that you decide to edit this some (either when you learn the language more or grow up... I'm not exactly sure which is your problem), it has potential.