why bother even naming him anyone who is a pokemon fan wouldve guessed who he was pretty damm easily i mean he is mewtwo the first pokemon movies main focus lol not to mention it takes away the fun of guessing who the mystery character is and being right(or wrong if its a hard enough one to guess)

uhm not to be rude but just my opinion baseing that riolu are awesome wouldnt he have started out unevolved and then leveled up into evolution?

wow this is a great story! aaaa grovyle is in love with celebi! i hope you will keep writing

KEEP IT UP AMAZING WORK! '

from grovylethethieflover!

Lawyer Phoenix Wright

i... did not see that coming

who planned that gas attack is smart or just lucky

and once again, Mewtwo knows how to put boots to asses

that is the most disturbing info that can ever be said

time working or time broken. it doesn't matter. Spiritomb is still cuckoo for cocoa puffs

Hmm... this is pretty good. i don't see why you have to end it at this moment, but that's just me

*sigh*

I didn't even read to the end of this story to know that it's dead, Your grammar is moderate, Your idea of the another person appearing is Good, but the plot? Terrible, undeniable that you made up crap as you went on, Grovyle and celebi are too OOC, Celebi not as much. By the way,

In chapter one, What pride? My reaction was ?

All in all, Bleh, Sure your idea and grammar is ok but your plot is terrible.

Think of it like a PB&J sandwich,

Idea and grammar is The peanut butter and jelly.

The plot is the bread, what are you going to do without bread?

That was epic

YAY YOU UPDATED! I almost forgot about this story, you were taking so long!

What does Mewtwo need there?

another gem is trageted