Wow, this is really impressive. You have a beautiful writing, and the insight of the characters, and mostly of Jack's feelings is brilliant, I rarely read anything this deep, innovative and right about him. Very intense, with angst AND with heart-melting love ; it was a lovely thing to put at the end that Ianto was in the bed, next to him, while all the beginning of the text seemed like lonely depressed thoughts. This is great, congrats!

D: If only that were true. I still miss Ianto, lol.

Loved the turnaround at the end! Nicely done.

Keep writing!

What an intriguing take on Jack, one that makes perfect sense even though it puts him in a (slightly at least) bad light.

Oooh, I like it

*huggles* I haven't died, but I've pulled most of my abdominal muscles, possibly bruised my ribs, and burned and strained my throat since Tuesday, all due to excessive retching and... yeah. I'm sure you can figure out the rest . Basically, every movement is agony, and I'm on the verge of becoming surgically attached to my hot water bottle. Not fun :/

Lucy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

OMG, beautiful and oh so true!

Way angsty. To sad for me