the end of this story is so EPIC!

I really love these stories you write. Mind if I critic a little? They need to be a bit longer and a little more detail, like the kissing and what not or it'll feel to plain but either way it is concise and if that's how you like to write then its fine. Keep at it C:

This is my type of story; EXPLODING DESKS! :D

Love it soo cute :)xx

I can honestly Blood him doing that... writing a story based on his romance with Alice & using it to rub it in to Peter or, if they could meet, her ex.

me encanto *o* amo a blood!

IT WAS SO CUTE!

*fangirl squeal*

Heheh... Not bad. I hate Blood, so that's tainting my review a little, but I liked it overall. My favorite part was when Elliot got Alice to confess her love for Blood. Such a good friend. Such a good guy.

It was really funny at the end. Keep it up!

this story is really going well! Please, continue! I'm waiting for a beatiful ending. Your describtions of the characters are amazing. i love the way you show Blood's nature. Good job

Update soon~~

Poor Elliot, great job!

Oh no, Alice and Elliot is in serious trouble! Great job! Keep it up!

So short but it captures my interests well enough lol! Can't wait to see what happens next XD

Oh ho! Alice is in serious trouble! I can picture Blood handcuffing her to the bed, great story!

i truly dont mind this version of Blood (more of an aggressive prince), the Blood in manga was a bastard.