the in betweens sound stupid as shit. it woulda been better without them

only real complaint is all the Japanese mixed in, the titles and stuff like Baachan, or the suffixes(?) like -san, -kun, -chan, -sama, are fine. However, the random other japanese words sprinkled in are a bit much, readable, but they mess with the "rythm" of the story.

I totally forgot about using sensing natural chakra as a means of perception, good job. One thing that sticks out is giving blood or chakra samples to anyone not absolutely trusted, shinobi are not so incautious.

After a couple months working as a reliable healer, Sakura would be able to get proper cooking tools.

I like your style and setting. Let's see where this goes.

ooooOooo this is a very interesting plot so far

I know Sakura is mentally older, but I'm not getting the right vibes with all the drinking and innuendo. she looks 8, that's all there is to it. Itachi is 8 or 9. my kids are 8, maybe that's why I'm having a hard time

You know as bad as her being blind is supposed to be the fact that some of the biggest plot points in naruto revolve around taking ppls "special eyes" to replace your own failing,weaker, uglier and or damaged eyes kind of kills the "Oh no poor sakura feeling". That might just be me though who knows *shrugs*

No.

'if the world Madara was going to create was one which she could not exist, he didnt want to be any part of it' kisame is sooo adorable

I've always loved kisame and sakura's bantering. There is just something really cute about it. Very sibling-ish

I LOVE THIS! I read through the first chapter and fell in love with it, and i like how you include the power of playing with hair XD

Wow what a start

Dun dun dunnnnn

Eh. Her completely shutting down because they screamed at her lack of eyes and having a panic attack seems to me like a contrived way to get Itachi back in there with her. Save the damsel in distress and all that.
But maybe that's just me.

"But it did not feel like a threat"
Only you, Itachi.