Super cute. I was a bit confused at the beginning, not really knowing what was going on, but once I started figuring it out everything made sense. It was really well written and I love the concept. Bravo.

Interesting fic, I do think Isabel's slightly OOC, but it can be overlooked.

I absolutely love it...

Write more Isabel/Broderick, please!

Very interesting

I've never read a story like this before

Jo, this is honestly one of your best, if not THE best, of all of your stories. It's just gorgeous.

I've been meaning to review and favorite this for awhile, but I didn't get the opportunity until now. So glad I finally did. :)

The description is just so vivid - I can see the image in my mind. The wedding scene was painted wonderfully, the idea oh-so-original, and the last lines packed a real punch.

I did catch two grammar errors, which I shall attempt to point out:

"Around her eyes was black smudged black make-up" Just take out the first black.

"She's never felt happier to be alive." Your biggest grammar weakness has always been tenses, as you've told me, and here was just a little mix-up with present tense. Not hard to fix.

And I have no other CC to give, which is rather (okay, extremely) rare these days. But it also won a Madrigal Award. Not at all a shock. It's a classic, Jo. I'll leave it at that. :)

~Syberia~

This is amazing. HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH SUCH A MASTERPIECE! I really don't have anything to say about it. Just wow. Bravo.

THIS IS AMAZING!

YOU'RE AMAZING!

GO AHEAD, DROWN IN MY PRAISE!

... You know you want to. :D

But I'm serious, this is just brilliant. The way you did it was lovely, and I just love everything about it...

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant, although it didn't seem to make sense at first, until I read your A/N. Good job on finding those loopholes.

I shouldn't bother reviewing, since I'm only gonna say...

...interesting.

This is just...wow.

I think I'll favorite this~

Apologies for my short and crappy review.

-Lieutenant of Artemis

...I've decided that I haven't reviewed enough of your stories. :D

Wow, great job.

Pros:

Spelling/Grammar. Whew. :)

Characterization. Isabel was mainly IC. This was, of course, before the 39 Clues series, so I'm assuming that Isabel didn't take the serum yet, and is at least a little more humane. XD

Description.

Cons:

You switch tenses. Like in the last sentence in italics, "She's never felt happier to be alive," is present. And the italics before say "it was over", past tense. So yeah, that was my main pet peeve.

Please fix the errors.

I read your fic as a whole, then italics only and regular only. It flowed beautifully.

The last sentences were...amazing.

So, this story is in my favorites, and in my community.

This is really good. However, I hate you now for actually- could it be?- making ME feel SORRY for ISABEL! How could you DO it? Haha, that was overdramatic of me. XD

No, on a serious note, I really liked this. But poor Isabel... Why did you just make me THINK that? :D

~Lily

I like the way you describe Isabel's outfit with detail. Good.

Beautiful, Jo. You just left me speechless.

~Jamie

You could have made it Isabel and Arthur in her mind instead will 'ya? Broderick and her seem a little of... But other than that, I loved it!

-Paige

This is really nice. Very awesome, too.