| Reviews for you lost your chance |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 10/13/2018 I loved your story and anyone who tells you that you camt wrote or are lazy, know that it is a lie. |
 cunningSalazar chapter 11 . 6/12/2017 Can I adopt it |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/20/2017 Oh come on! This story was just getting good! |
| Phil chapter 11 . 1/3/2017 Why must you crush my dreams I loved this fanfic |
| Adam chapter 11 . 12/19/2016 Heres my idea percy should fall in love and annabwth gets jeolos |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/30/2016 M Sex Mmmmm Yes yes! |
| erick aka k9 chapter 11 . 3/15/2016 dont leave us hanging i thought it was pretty good |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2015 An army of creatures with water? LOL! So you're saying that he can summon creatures with a bucket of water? LMAO YOU'RE DUMB |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2015 WHY IS THERE SO MANY FUCKING MISTAKES GO BACK TO SCHOOL NINCUMPOOP |
| The Darkness chapter 11 . 9/5/2015 I will be watching young child. |
| Anonymous chapter 11 . 8/23/2015 Even though I haven't been on this site before until a few months ago, I think you should continue writing. Put effort and dedication into it. -Your Friend, Anonymous |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2015 Dude,cask your language arts teacher about show dont tell. He will know. You have too many runon sentences |
| Charlee56 chapter 11 . 10/14/2014 I just read your remarks. They almost read like a rant, but I DO understand why you wrote about this other person with the religious bend to his stories. As for me? Well, I think that you had a brilliant little story going on here. They don't all have to read like Rick Riordan wrote them; writers like Anaklusmos 14 and Charlie Guevara, Theseus Lives DO write like RR, or even better! And they do sometimes accept what others write and submit to them when they hit the proverbial "brick wall" that all writers come up against from time to time. Don't be afraid to ask for help. If a Beta helps you, or just another reader like me, that's not so bad. It's what they are here for, and me too. And as much as this story is 3 years old now, it still has possibilities; you shouldn't let it stay on the "Dead Storys" pile! At least, I don't think so. So pick it up! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/10/2014 You awesome! Plz don't stop!7! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/10/2014 Pretty good...I like it! |
