I want there to be more of this!

This was both funny and hot.
Would love to see a full story if it ever happen.

Thanks for sharing

This is something I would want to read more of

That was hot, but cute, very smexy kind of a shame that Edward had his first gay experience in a strip joint, but Jasper was probably a lot better for him than any other man in a, similar situation. Jazz in chaps "fans self, I can't breath"

reading this again that was sexy and fun! usually don't really like these settings but you made it romantic and sweet along the way, I am a sucker for pretty women movie type stories cx

It's funny. I have seldom read a story with so much sex but so not sexy.

I so wish that we could follow these two after this night at the stripclub! It would've been wonderful to see where they ended up eventually!
Thanks for an awesome story anyway! It was brilliant:)

lucky Edward.

Oh my do I love it when Rob, errr Edward blushes, he just looks so damn cute and virginal even the tips of his ears turn pink and if he is really embarrassed, the whole ear turns pink, oh my be still my heart, *fans self furiously* yum great story, yes love Strippersper

While Jasper was indeed fuckin' hawt, I was drawn to beautiful, virgin Edward *le sigh!* Together, they were smokin' and I kinda hope they really do get together and stay together!

Very sweet (and sexy of course). Great character development and believability. Not sure it's really pwp, just a great one shot or an opening chapter!

Wow, that was so hot! Loved it!

Awesome story! More please?

Wow...fantastic!

Okay, I LOVE THIS STORY! Please write a follow up, and more smut (save this story somewhere, The Great FanFiction Purge has begun and any story with even a Lime is under question.) Please?

save the Lemons!