Reviews for Big Trouble
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14
How does this story not have a lot more reviews? It was too awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14
I love this story! My, my... I would've loved to have read Raph's reaction. Donatello in his lab making new blueprints for the van and suddenly hearing Raph yell, "WHAT!" Donatello possibly even hearing a scrambling Leo zooming past his lab to run for the safety of whichever room, nearest, with a lock on the door. Seriously, great job. I loved the descriptions.
GuestGirl chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
That was hilarious! Oh my gosh, that was really funny. Especially the beginning where Leo breaks the news...and then it just kept on getting worse :D
flikaroo chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
Great job on the characterization. Poor Leo, when he screws up, he really screws up! I would be curious to read how Raph responds, how much teasing Mikey does and how long Leo can handle helping Donnie instead of training.
Sarachan chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Is there a sequel?
Flylo-13 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
lol that was funny and I wonder how raph's reaction will be but still this was a cool story

tigerleah-out
Lena chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This is so great story) I like it)
LenniluvsBrian chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Oh, I am amused. Lmao. Leave it to Leo to trash something so badly - lol.

Great fic!

~Lenni~
timme chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
poor Leo. constantly punished for his absence. Leo really would have helped don or anyone who asked. and he deals with Raph ALL THE TIME. Don did for only two years.
princessebee chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Leo breaking the news to Donny and his subsequent reaction were highpoints... so funny and so good. I really enjoyed this whole story though I was left wanting more... sort of felt like it might have lost momentum at the end and got wrapped up. Though Donny's unexpected little jab at Leo added a surprise tension to the piece that was jarring... but still worked. Again, I think this combination of elements is a big factor in making these stories, with the interactions and relationships, so believable and therefore enjoyable.
nim draug chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
This was really good, loved the link to the movie towards the end. :) x
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
funny
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Wow. That was hilarious, guys. I can see Don still feeling resentment for Leo leaving. And now Leo's going to have to explain this to Raph all on his own, which won't be an easy task. Great job on this.

The Bubbly One,

Shell
vacant houses chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
"I… I sort of wrecked the van. And the garage. You know, uh. Simultaneously."

Leo is exceptionally talented at everything he does. Even his screw ups.

...what did Raph's bike do that made you guys decide to total it?
NinjaMisha chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I LOVE THIS!

I swear, you guys write the PERFECT Don...and I thank you for that. 3

It was so easy to visualize every expression, head shake, body language...everything!

I only wish I were talented enough to animate this whole fic.

You don't know this, but you three where the first writers I started following when I first got head deep into the TMNT fandom. So having you all together writing fics just blows my mind! You're my dream team!

Anyways, keep on writing, people! I can't wait to read anything else you guys spit out :D
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