nice! cant wait for the next chapter!

It's been soo long since I've read this fanfic and I know you haven't updated in forever but I hope someday you do come back! I understand your medical conditions but I will always be one of those waiting for the next update :) And don't listen to those who are hating your story - you have many followers!

I am enjoying this so far, in spite of my general dislike of retelling cannon episodes with OC's added. Mostly it's just that the OC always steals Sheppard's best lines! lol I tend to prefer post-season 5 continuations.

Couple things...you skip over how Cam acquires the Ancient Repository of Knowledge. This is a problem, because, as in the original episode, might have been "The Fifth Race", not sure, but Teal'c walked through a circle of Ancient script on the floor in front of the Repository, and nothing. Jack walked into the circle, and the Repository appeared.

Cam couldn't have gotten the knowledge in the Milky Way galaxy, because she is host to a Goa'uld symbiote, which Milky Way Ancient tech protects itself against.

Second, how does cam have the ATA gene? If she was born with it, that's fine. It's just that there is no explanation for it.

Otherwise, liking it so far.

Tok'ra in Stargate universe

I hope your getting better with best regards!

I know this is probably a bit late! But I really enjoy your story and I love your writing style. The idea of a Tokra in Atlantis is really cool.

I'm sorry that it took me so long to read this, but here I am. :)
It was quite a bit unexpected that Cam had been knocked out that hard. She doesn't manage to catch a break, does she?
There are two things however that had me confused: when Kel'an had been asleep at the beginning you completely glanced over the symbiote awakening when Cam went for the device of the Tollans. And the second is near the end: why had Kel'an again been outside her host when that Goa'uld had entered?

Hi? I hope you are well. Its been ages since you last updated. All of us are waiting for an update or atlest a notice of when the next chapter is coming.

Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter! Also what's the pairing?

Hi. Just fnished reading ch. 12 and i wondering whats the point of this fanfic? In 12 chapter nothing changed from original stroy. Cam being in atlantis has absolutely no impact on the storyline. She is just running around doing translations and healing everyone. Even her translations dont help atlantis, so whats the plint? I hoped that with her help they will atlest manage to get the zpm, but no. So why bother with this retelling, when everyone can just rewatch the episodes? I trully hope that in future chapters something will change. Otherwise this is a big waste of time. Your writting is realy good,take pride in that. Good luck.

Then i'll check out that story next! :)

Yay, a new chapter! I'm sure I speak for all the readers of the story when I say we really appreciate your work, especially in light of your medical condition. (Though I have to ask: given your shoulder pains have you ever considered installing on your computer a voice-to-text program? That way you could just speak and the program would turn it into text, reducing the amount of typing you would need to do manually. I can't stare at the screen for long periods of time so I have a similar (if simpler) program that reads out text to me)

Moving on to the review: good work as usual - a logical rewrite given the changing circumstances, a somewhat unexpected twist of having the main character being nearly killed, we get an explination of Danny's powers and some more hints of Cam being part of some grand plan. But I felt Cam having a Tollan detachment device with her was somewhat of a cop out. Why would the Tok'Ra bring something like that with them to another galaxy, uninhabited by the Goa'uld? What use would it serve? Wouldn't bringing along the Tok'Ra lie-detector be more useful?

Best regards, A.A.

P.S.: Hooray, mine is the the 100th review!
P.S.S.: if you feel like dropping off some Tok'Ra-related story ideas, the 9th round of Tok'Ra Kree! is on now (the drop off period lasts until May 14)

Love it I can not wait for next chapter and more to come on this book

sweet job keep it up

I would love to see this become a Ronan/Cam fanfic