Reviews for The Twilight Will
Mixedfangamer123 chapter 50 . 7/29
so when will this story update it has been over a year since it was last updated
Guest chapter 49 . 7/19
Wait, so Two become one became Fate reaver?
Guest chapter 48 . 7/19
This makes me wonder if Roxas will use Fate Reaver to absorb Xemnas
Chad0615 chapter 50 . 7/20
Is this story still alive
Guest chapter 50 . 7/18
The fic is finally dead
dragonlink28 chapter 50 . 6/7
will roxas's equivlant of final form, fusion form?
dragonlink28 chapter 50 . 5/31
wolud you allow someone to do a reading/viewing of this story? if so i won't because i can't write to save my life.
Arika Koski chapter 50 . 3/25
Update this story please. I have to say this is one good story and Roxas is absolutely my first favorite Kingdom Hearts character and I hope he gets his own new spin off game that acts like a sequel to 358/2 Days taking place after Kingdom Hearts 3 where he and his friends especially Namine go on their own adventures.
DragonSilhouette chapter 50 . 2/26
Wow! That was intense! I loved the battle, especially that conclusion. It's always interesting whenever worlds get mashed together, haha. I also like how the drawback of Checkmate was portrayed. I can't remember if something like that happened earlier in the story, but it's funny to see Roxas' victory turning into an Oh, Crap moment.
Great work as always, I can't wait for the next chapter :)
joeyblast chapter 50 . 2/14
I have a list of ideas you could use for the next world!

1. Max Steel
2. Sonic the Hedgehog: Sonic Unleashed
3. Shadow the Hedgehog

Please let me know what you think!
joeyblast chapter 4 . 2/12
You could always add Undertake or one of its AU's
Wolfy wanna bite chapter 48 . 1/19
I hope the KH3 Re Mind DLC inspires you to update this story. Also there seems to be stuff going on between Roxas, Tammy, and Pandora. With Tammy having some interesting moments with Kain that may affect her feelings and Pandora seemingly cozying up to Roxas. I'm wondering if that might cause some drama between the group.
Roxas Itsuka chapter 11 . 1/7
Awesome chapter. So it's Jak and Daxter's world now. I know the game from watching a friend play it but never played it myself.

Roxas with a gun/blaster, I wonder how Xigbar would react to this.

So the Chesire Cat has a much deeper role. That should be interesting to see. When he said Alice's journey was over for now, could he have been referring to 'Madness returns'? I hope so. That game was especially dark.
darkness333 chapter 3 . 1/3
Re reading this again and I still enjoy it I really hope you continue soon and if you don't mind I have some suggestions for the world in a possible sequel

Legend of zelda wind waker or twilight princess
DMC
Nier automata
FF XIII or XV
Kid icarus
Metroid
And bayonetta

These are the world I would like to see anyway hope to see more
Roxas Itsuka chapter 10 . 12/28/2019
Awesome chapter. That was quite a fight. Roxas and Alice really make a good team, and friends, with that coordination of theirs.

I'm glad the Wonderland residents have been restored. However, I'm surprised at what the Red Queen was trying to do. It's similar to Namine though obviously different.

Roxas and Alice parted as good friends. The tea joke by Roxas was quite funny as well. I hope they team up again someday.

Alice returning to sanity and her speech at the end was beautiful.

That part with Namine though. I'm guessing they were Roxas' drive forms. I'm surprised at how much he hates her. I wonder if they will always be that way, or will Namine eventually redeem herself and help Roxas. Either way this was the perfect finish to the first arc, and well done one I might add.

Looking forward to the next game.
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