Yep. It's very similar to episode 4...right down to the fact that owen's and beru's death did not have much impact, no more then a few seconds :)).

Ey this was quite the story. Very enjoyable :)

You Miss Ink are one dynamite writer...how about you keep your chin up on writing? You're really good

likin this so far.

Wow this is one of the best fanfic I've ever read, it went straight onto my fav list. Original plot, good loving and very, very exiting. 5 star entertainment. Thanks :-)

Wow, what a great story this is! I started to read several hours ago, and I just can't stop. The way you describe Obi-Wan is wonderful, because he is still te same character but with a new life. I thought this might just be a fluffy story, but it's much, much more. Keep writing!

I recognise Thrice and Lord Blackswan from the Old Man and The Desert, but the situation's a bit different!I look forward to reading more.

Good story! :) I loved it. Thrice was a cool character and I love the way you "cloned" eveybody. That was a cool idea :D and the whole never dying thing

I absolutely loved this story! At first I thought it might be slow because of how uncertain Thrice's character is but boy was I wrong! I have to say, my favourite moment of this story is probably the strawberries! Brilliant work, can't wait to read more of your work!

That was a great story. just perfect. please dont stop with star wars...

i loved it. good ending :)

This was an excellent story. :) I'm a little sad that it's over, but I do like the way you ended it.

Perfect ending! *applause*

I laughed when I read the few paragraphs...Kiya's already keeping her parents on their toes. :D

And the banter between father and children was nicely done. I enjoyed this fic very much! I wish you had something else up your sleeve in way of plot bunnies.

Thanks for sharing; I look forward to more to come! (hint...)

Sincerely,

Bekah

Love that you added an epilogue, and yes, an overreacting Obi-Wan is very sweet.

You should write a sequel with Kiya as the main character. Good job with the story, it was very good.

great work