Reviews for Mistakes Made in the Dark
Recreational Potions chapter 35 . 7/20
This is one of those stories I kept seeing and passing over because it looked like just bald smut. But a pervy part of my brain was like, what if it's really good smut? Let me tell you, perve brain was so right, this is some gourmet smut. By getting the sex out of the way at tje start, it made for a different and entertaining kind of tension between them. The shift from extremely awkward to acknowledging they both want each other was well done.

This could have ended there, or when she finishes school but you took it further and that is what makes this story really good I think. You write and use each of Malfoys so well, I really loved them in this. The part with blowing up things in the lawn was entertaining and really spoke to all of them moving on from the awfulness of the war.

I also really liked how you carried their relationship out beyond it's beginning, showing how others reacted. I did totally cringe when I realized what is going to happen when he dropped in at her apartment the first time. So glad you went there. Oh and the trainwreck with the Malfoys when her mother comes over.

Finally the epilogue was delightful. Usually epilogues are just a flash of them in the future to show they are happy, but the level of detail you went into here made it more of a story unto itself. Loved him at the train station only wanting his children to not be in Hufflepuff. Anyway, thanks for writing this, it was super fun.
Becca chapter 13 . 7/12
That was amazing so far! I'm headed onto chapter 14 rn!
AwesomeFangirlOtaku01 chapter 10 . 7/3
Dude I lowkey always thought that Alan Rickman was handsome
MihioraM chapter 35 . 6/21
Clap... Clap.. Clap.
Wow what a wonderful read. Loved it
Thanks for sharing
No More Meow chapter 35 . 6/20
Wow. That was an amazing story. Thank you for sharing. I love every aspect, the humor, the smut, and even the slight angst. Bravo.
romanyorgelys19 chapter 35 . 6/18
Gmail.. oh mi dios. Tarde tres días en leer esta pelusa y me encantó. el enfoque de los Malfoy, la narración. Severus a quien amo en las dos versiones. Todo. Con el epílogo me recordaste un tanto a mi prometido que, en definitiva, amé. Bendito sea Merlin por permitirme encontrar tu historia. Besos
Opera123 chapter 35 . 5/15
amazing story thank you for sharing your gift with others
Opera123 chapter 33 . 5/15
felt like cheering when they said the L word
aislingdreamer1949 chapter 3 . 5/3
It is "I COULD Not CARE LESS! As in I really don't care. Could care less means he could, well, care less. Oh my, perhaps I should care less. I probably COULD care less if I wanted to. But, as it is I could NOT care less. A pet peeve...that and your and you're.
Trista Q chapter 35 . 4/20
One of the best stories I have read and reread. Thank you
MTaylor92 chapter 22 . 4/18
I came for Hermione and Severus, but man does Draco steak the show lol
MTaylor92 chapter 1 . 4/17
I haven’t even started this yet, but your notes at the start have me like, “yep this is about to be my new favorite author” lol
UnlikelyPresence chapter 34 . 4/13
I would review, but you AN at the end literally summed up what I was gonna say about the Malfoys throwing each other under the bus. Loved it!
Don'tForgetILoveYou chapter 35 . 4/11
Wow. I loved every minute of reading this story.
WhereforeArtThou chapter 35 . 4/6
Gah! So beautiful! Absolutely loved it ️
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