The fact that i can already tell that she's gonna forgive them make me soooo angry like seriously after everything they did to her I just can't keep reading this story which suck because i really thought it was going to be good! I just find it so stupid that she is forgiving them so fast even after everything! Calling James father it kind of disgust me o be honest!She shouldn't forgive them and just move on, if she want to kill Voldemort good but even talking to her supposed parents is just UGGGH! Anyway it's already a complete story so it's nothing can be changed but i just wanted to tell my opinion about it!

Are you daft?You only put 2 of the 3 accounts, I*not so politely* ask that you fix it.

this was like a dream story for me to read

I LOVE IT

Awesome chapter

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Absolutely loved this story. I really liked James and lily in it, it is so rare to find a story where the two of them make up for their actions and rekindle their relationship with Harry/fem harry. Good job well done.

This is just frustrating to read. Sentences just end randomly and don't finish, leaving it incomplete and me confused. Dumbledore doesn't make any sense at all. His motives are stupid. He doesn't want to kill Death Eaters because of the possibility of them being redeemed, yet he's okay with innocents dying? It's just absurd.

His behavior is more of that of an old rambling senile man than anything else. But if he was that, he shouldn't pose any problem at all for Lara. I hope she just kills him soon, because he doesn't add anything good to the story.

This is a fun read so far. Is Lara supposed to be 13/14 here? I'm not sure how she's driving a car, but I'll just guess that she uses magic so she doesn't get pulled over.

Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story.

*sigh* really? I want to hate lily and james so i always hate when people portray them wrong only for them to still be "Light" and do the right thing. I have no doubt this will end with her making up with her parents now that there son is gone and want lara. was so hoping for something and truly amazing, an unapologetic female character that knows the world isnt just black and white, i will continue searching

I loved this story it was amazing looking forward to reading some of your others.

amazing story! I love stories like this where harry is completely badass. keep writing!

before I post my review, may I ask how old you were when you wrote this? If less than, say, 16 or so, I have nothing to say.

Good story. Loved it.