The end's just Magic ! **

im kinda slow so i didnt really fet this, was it like 3 little clips of random or something?

Funny!

Okay, I love the ending! Perfect! Just really perfect! :)

lol i like the ending

It was such a short piece but I still loved it! I wish you'd write more to this fandom :) And I absolutely love this line:

"If she declines him, he will fucking carry her up to the bed, shag her senseless, and make a baby with her so she would have no choice but to take him as her husband."

I'd like to see that on the show! :)

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS.

Beautifully written. Lovely to read. Lyrical and almost like magic.

In essence: perfection.

Wounderful!

DAW! That was cute!

Mary

Wow, that last part really does sound like Hyde. But I don't really understand the title though

Good story and very in character.

Loved it! You have Jackie and Hyde's characters down to a T. Their little quirreling is so like them. Loved the last bit with the three steps also ) this was a cute story. Good work!

That was really cute! I liked it!