Reviews for Unpredictable
thenuminous chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Very well written! :)
PandaTheZodiacMaster chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Oh my god! -squeals- That's absolutely perfect the way you ended it. It saddens me there isn't any more but it's amazing how you can make them come alive like that!
The Last Poison Apple chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Unpredictable indeed! I enjoyed this a lot.
Cissa-Lycoris-Black chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Loved it!
OursIsTheFury94 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
That was incredibly good!

It was a realistic and mature portrayal of 2 of my favourite characters (and my favourite pairing). The tone of the fic was perfection, and you developed it so well, and at a great pace.

Very well done!
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Good although I don't think the slash was totally necessary. It would have been just as good a story or better with out it.
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
I thought it was good :)

Very nice of you to pair up these two! I found you through the site of the person you dedicated this to and thought I'd see what you had. I do like the story, but my preferences are for longer and T-M personally as well as femslash always ;D so it was a nice taste, but not filling for my insatiable appetite if you catch my meaning.

Thanks for writing!
RandomMumble chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Lately I came to enjoy this pairing somehow. )

And I'm no Ron/Hermione shipper so this story pleased me in many ways ;P

Very well written. I really enjoyed it! Thank you! )
Paper Pearls chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
That was an incredibly moving one-shot, and I found the scenario to be believable. The idea of Ron growing distant and their marriages being damaged by the war was interesting, and it certainly worked well. It was one of the most realistic Narcissa/Hermione stories that I've ever read, and it was extremely well written - graceful.

It was a beautiful, bittersweet story. Well done.
Pesky Ixy Pesternomi chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Veryyy Unpredictable, I've never read a Hermione/Narcissa before. It was interesting though. Stupid Won Won, making my favorite girl feel lonely. I can def see how in that situation Hermione would want to go out and do something reckless though, I enjoyed this, good job.
Just twisty chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
A lovely view into two souls searching for truth. Well written and it flowed smoothly.
MadameCissy chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
THIS WAS FANTASTIC! *does happy dance* I love my birthday present.

I loved the emotional touch... the sense of feeling lost. I never believed in Hermione/Ron and always believed she would become unhappy. Narcissa is a realistic person to understand this loneliness. They make a wonderful pairing on that basis and you have done them so much justice bringing them together this way.