It's been over a year Hirospirt

DAMN! How I love drama! *D You got a good fanfic on your shoulder, HeroSpirit. I actually thought of making this comment after I read all of your current chapters. Keep it up!

P.S. I would consider proofreading on a daily basis on your earliest work. I actually had to read it more than once to make out the message. :P

A good chapter, and great to see it continued! Though I do have a pair of less-than positive comments about the characters' actions...

First off, holy crap, Rito is *such* a drama queen. He needs to stop acting like everything that happens is a total disaster. It kind of makes me want to kick him square in the rear. But at least he realizes that he really is kind of a stalker. So there's that.

And Brayden convincing Rito that it's okay to lie to Darlyne about Rita is *supremely* bad advice. The "ignorance is bliss" approach is pretty much always a mistake in the long run. Because she'll eventually find out...and the longer he keeps it going, the more she's going to be hurt by the truth. But then, he can't even be upfront with his sister about what's going on, so it's hardly surprising.

I know I'm being pretty hard on poor Rito, but it's just frustrating to see him dig himself into a deeper and deeper hole. It's lies on top of lies, you know? He should really start coming clean about everything, at least to his sister. But I guess he's reacting like an average teenager...or an average person in general. That doesn't mean it's a wise course of action, though.

I hope you don't take too long a break. Despite the above comments, I really do enjoy this story quite a bit! Thanks for the update.

More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please. More please.

This is an astounding story. Keep it up!

Wow, didn't see that coming

Good Chapter

"...in the flashback Ian and I were surrounded by a fluffy pink background. Several bubbles randomly float around us." Whee! Hilarious.

If this were a shoujo manga, "Rita" would totally fall for Ian, the self-absorbed womanizer, and he'd give up his douchebag ways for her. First, he'd decide that he *must* have her. Then she'd put up a token resistance, then cave. And when it seemed like he might lose her, he'd finally realize how much she meant to him. That's the plot to thousands and thousands of romance stories, and Rita and Ian are currently set up perfectly for that scenario...y'know, other than the whole "really a guy" thing.

Oh, Rito. You poor sap. Things just aren't going your way. Not that you help matters much.

"It's common knowledge in the world of science that if you stitch a female rat onto a male rat's body... well... the male rat always becomes feminine in a matter of weeks..." My, I certainly did not expect to be reading *that* particular sentence! :)

Yay, an update!

So Rito would rather have his sister think he's a cross-dresser than tell her the truth. What a neurotic dope...but a *charming* neurotic dope!

And of course that's who won the poll! Because that'll just make things all the more complicated for Rito. Complications for Rito equal entertainment for the readers. :) And you pulled it off even better than I could've hoped. Very nice! Such fun, such fun. (Well, fun for me, at least. Not so much for Rito.)

Keep up the fantastic work, my friend. This one just keeps getting better!

Interesting chapter

Well, I can write a 3000 word essay, do some role-play shit, play some videogames, proofread a chapter, make a coffee, smoke a cigarette and go out drinking in one night. It's all about how you handle your time.

Anyway... I'm thinking Rito should reveal to his sibling his predicament. It would certainly mean he'd have a guide to help him work out the... Tougher parts of his newfound womanhood. And we all know what I'm on about. If you don't, check your biology notes. The ones you were embarrassed about at one point. And started feeling sorry for the girls because of their...pains.

Other than that, good job! I look forward to the next chapter.

Huzzah! This is such an entertaining little tale. Rito is just a gigantic dork...and I mean that affectionately, believe me. Every chapter leaves me smirking.

Observation, though: um, Kyouko's apparently gone a substantial length of time now without being able to deal with any of her bodily necessities. Rito probably deserves a sound thrashing at this point for stuffing her into drawers...repeatedly. It's also technically a felony to detain someone against their will like that, so he should probably consider an alternate course of action fairly soon! Just sayin'.

I voted in the poll, but it was a tough call! At least five of the choices were quite appealing. (Not quite sold on the old bully idea. And the more Jusenkyo victims you have, the more complicated the story becomes. But...well, maybe that would be helpful to Rito, especially if it were the same curse.)

Anyway, thanks for another most enjoyable installment. I look forward to chapter 10!

Interesting story. hope to read more soon.

Nice this should cause trouble for Rito or should I say Rita

Excellent chapter. Fun fun! Great use of Rito's abilities.

A thought, however. I get why Rito would want to keep it a secret from his sister, but is that really wise? (Hint: No. No, it's not.) The longer he tries to keep it from her, the more misunderstandings there'll be. She would probably help if she knew the truth, right? The sooner Rito realizes that, the less complicated his home life will be. Maybe Rene would even be excited about having a part-time little sister! And it's not like he'll be getting rid of the curse anytime soon (though he might not grasp that yet).

I love that Kyoko (did i spell that right?) is a guena pig!

But what's next? I'm hoping you can keep going on, but not dragging it out. Don't strain yourself!