yay for updates! - and chapter 6 should deal with the past stuff -

this is amazing, especially with 2 chapters here, and I really wanna know what heppens next. please update soon, and im sorry that my review was late. I had to revise, because i had three exams to get ready for. but better late than never ;D

ok i like this chapter too its cute. and are you gonna bring something up in the next coupla chapters about how "she forgot"? PLEASE DO. PLEASEPELASEPLEASEEEEEEEE

ok well i like where this is oging, but instead of having 2 really short chapters, why dont you have your Chapter 1 be like the Prologue and have the rest of this be chaPTER 1 INSTEAD OF 1 & 2?

This is another great chapter, and please update soon, because I want to read more of this story, because it sounds great!

Okay, I'm going to be honest. I like the idea, but I was confused who was talking when because it was all condensed into one paragraph. Don't worry though, I'm still going to read_

~Moon Dragon94

well NOT a flame but just some pointers/Tips:

where it says *slams locker* you probably might want to say something like I slammed my locker, or Isabella slammed her locker

also these * should not be used so much

and the italic is kind of distracting

not to mention adding aposthropes in I'm might not be a bad idea

lastly some spaces might be nice

other than that its pretty good :D i look forward to more

oooh wonder what happens... that isabella girl seems...not trustable is she?

I think this is going to be a great story, and i can't wait for the next chapter to be published, because I think this is going to be a really good story.