Reviews for Yamcha |
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![]() ![]() Continue it, please! |
![]() ![]() I really liked this fan fiction you should make another part |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did great! |
![]() ![]() Hi! This is Mononoke-no-Neko95. I personally think that you should continue and make this story more than a one shot! It is extremely well written and I expecially enjoyed your take on how Yamsha and Pu'ar met eachother. That is just my opinion though, so please do continue if you ever find the incling to do so! If you choose to continue, however, I would also include more info about Bulma and Vegeta as to not completely alienate them from the story! I would very much appreciate it if you were to reply, though I wouldn't be to upset if you were to busy to answer back... Thank you for listening. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw~ That was so adorable! 3 |
![]() ![]() This is a marvelous story! Besides a few mispellings, everything was great! It's very sweet how Yamcha cares so much for Puar. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kiawi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Works as a one-shot. A bunch of spelling errors, but the content is lovely. _ Just fix those up a bit. Lovely warm fuzzy feelings, and not the romantic kind either, which is what I prefer. |
![]() ![]() it was great please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... I love Yamcha and Puar. I even love Vegeta and Bulma (because it means Yamcha and Puar can get together). What a sweet fic. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! that was sooo CUTE! You need to continue it! If only puar was human... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *has a soft smile, hugs Pua-chan and Yam* oh, if only she wasn't a cat... they're so pefect together, Puar wouldn't break his heart like that blue-haired.. *notices the story's rated G, stops* you get the point... I find it unfair that everyone bashes Yammy... why? Why do they do that? so they can have ther perfect little B-V relationship, with scapegoat? thay's wrong... *hugs yam* geeat, beautiful fic |
![]() ![]() I like I like I like! You should continue it as as a story, it could be really good! (Not that it isn't!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet. Please continue if you have the chance. |