Reviews for Kiri's Revolution |
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my 2 guys chapter 1 . 9/28/2018 that was good keep the chapters coming |
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 7/16/2018 J'aime beaucoup bon début et bonne intrigue. |
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 1/4/2018 that was good keep the chapters coming |
BlackDog0723 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017 Is there going to be a new chapter |
lenny chapter 1 . 9/25/2016 Very good story look forward reading more of it thank you |
TkAnime chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 Write more |
rikodou sennin chapter 1 . 9/26/2013 when is the next chapter out |
banditdk19 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013 Even if Danzo had years to do it, you can't hide that many missing nins... How the heck was Naruto subdued that easily? If it is after Pain invasion, then he knows Sage mode and some pathethic Jonins are nothing compared to Pain... |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2012 Please keep going! |
Mad Library Scientist chapter 1 . 6/18/2012 Y U NO UPDATE? |
JohnTitor chapter 1 . 11/4/2011 This was good, all the questions I had, were questions you wrote down at the end. I think since you knew the questions people might have, that you should have just answered them in your story and not have the big AN note at the end. Either way, I really like this fic so far. Is Water country suppose to be Kiri? I though Kiri was Mist, since Zabuza was the Demon of the Hidden Mist. Either way, I like this fic. Instead of just having Mei charge in, you explained that she did it because of a gut feeling, which keeps people from saying she's being an idiot. I like this chapter, can't wait to see more. I really like that you didn't include HUGE fighting scenes. I hope this revolves more around romance, but being a Naru/Mei fic, I can't really be picky. Good job and good luck. |
HanseDavion chapter 1 . 9/13/2011 Though I hate that Tsunada was killed this is still a great first chapter. Will you becontinuing it? I hope so. There are a few different directions it could go. Well, I look forward to an update or maybe a pm on weither or not there will be one. HanseDavion |
WolfLeader4000 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011 Finaly another good writer! you sould keep writting NarutoxMei because you're prety good at once your done with this one. |
YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING chapter 1 . 4/1/2011 great story but are you going to continue |
herimony chapter 1 . 3/18/2011 It's really good so far. Hope you continue it, love to know what will happen next |