Reviews for Elementary |
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bajy chapter 1 . 5/23/2016 Again, I loved the story poor Basil a strong friendship between the detective and doctor |
Brinatello chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 This was an extremely wonderful read; I'm glad to see more stories being submitted with everyone in character. Also, your vocabulary is very professional-sounding and your sentence structure is quite excellent. The plot itself was very intriguing: Basil having a terrible memory about a case gone wrong with another child. As they say, history repeats itself, and with both Miss Flaversham and Ratigan involved, he did NOT want a repeat of whatever happened. I am curious to know if Basil ever wants to share the information with Dawson. In other words, I'd love to read more if you have plans to do so! Good work! |
DisneyPrincess chapter 1 . 10/26/2010 This was an excellent story! I love the Great Mouse Detective too, and I always wondered what set off the rivalship b/t Basil and Ratigan...I never thought of this scenario, but it's quite good. Well done! However, if Ratigan started off as a lawyer, why is his title PROFESSOR Ratigan? Was he ever an actual instructor at a university? |
nolongusedeactivate chapter 1 . 10/25/2010 This was a very charming and interesting piece. I loved the way you kept them in character especially with Basil's personality. I haven't watched that movie in ages but I certainly want to check it out again after reading this. As much as I love Pixar, there's something so enjoyable about the classic handrawn animation that you don't really see nowadays. Great as always! XD ~Divine Arion~ |