I know I should be mad at you for making Finn sorta "dog alike" reacting to "simple commands" but you're too sweet and the piece is too fun for me to think that. Thanks for making me laugh :)

Interesting to see Finn's other concerns with RHPS, not just his insecurity about his own body. I like it!

omg that was an amazing story awesome writing

Awwww cute! :P yeah I wish there was more Finchel in Rocky Horror. There was just that one scene and all they got was a hug. Well you did a great job of filling in that gap for me. Great story!

omgomgomgomgomgomg what is breathing.

hope to read more from you young lady!

Rachel is not scared to be in charge and Finn loves it!

This is great! :D Nice job.

Great fic! I really like it and I thinks that you portray the characters really well, you should definitely write more fics , I'll be looking forward to see more fics after new year hahaha,

Woah. What a story

LOVED this :) beyond awesome and soo Finchel... I think Rachel would totally be in charge and and i love how you write them so in character :)

I would've liked for this to be an actual scene from the RHGS episode. Amazing job, keep writing!

QUINN! It's me. I'm going to let you guess who, though.

I loved this! (As I'm sure you know by now) I'm so happy you finally wrote/posted something! The dialogue is amazing, and THE ENDING! Aww, that ending 3

I love how you balanced Protective!Finn out with HBIC!Rachel. The feminists can suck it, we all know Rachel's always the one in charge ;D

One tiny crit though(I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND!): I found the narrative a little too vague. I had a hard time picturing their locations throughout the story. But don't think too much of it, because the dialogue and ENDING are just outstanding 3