WHAT. HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!

awww, come on! You can't just leave your fans hanging, I stayed up late just to read this, you should update, this is fantastic!

Well, what happened? You can't just leave your story unfinished. That's cruel to anyone who reads it. If you no longer write fanfiction, then that's alright, but please finish the story. Don't just leave things unfinished.

This is pretty darn good! I would love a continuation. Some minor coorection: in dialogue you don't have to use proper English. Like: "I am going to the park" you can just write "I'm going to the park" or "I am feeling unwell" you can write "I'm not feeling so good."
This is just a minor thing about chapter 7, and you have grown in chapter 8. I can't wait for another chapter, your fanfic is so in character that I can literally hear them in my head speaking as I read. Your descriptions are very very good-as many a well written author has said keep it vague but not too vague-draw a picture but let the reader paint it-and you do this so well! Please post an update. -Insomnikit

Here's a review, so I hope you keep working on the chapter.

I'd have no objections to another story... provided it doesn't detract from this one.

A pretty good chapter, all in all. Seems like it's setting the stage for us.

OMG, I love it!

Please update a.s.a.p.

Lograran abrir la caja fuerte ? . Que contiene dentro ? . Ya quiero leer el próximo capitulo !

Todo fue por Brianna ? . Por que ? . Que fue lo que sucedió ?

Quien le habla a Brianna ? . Rex podrá seguir siendo un súper héroe ?

wow Este episodio es genial ! . Lograra Van Kliess ganar lo que quiere ? . Porque Circe lo ayuda ? . Que paso entre Brianna y Kliess ? .

Gran capitulo , bien escrito :)

wow , Rex es tan fuerte aunque no tiene poderes ! . Que pasara ahora ? .

Me encanto el capitulo ! leeré toda la historia :)

Fue un capitulo espectacular :)

I want to see more soon and fast !