I ship this pairing , hard. Far too hard. Cute but very cheesy. I like it. :)

Awwwwwww, So fluffy! :3

That scene alwats gave me the feels, be it slash or otherwise, because Wilbur just risks his existence to give Lewis a chance to live his infancy with his mother. And you took it and made an awesome fluff fic that gives me more feels. For that you are awesome. I think I'll check your other fics.

I consider this a T.
just pointing it out

Awesome! And yet I know how weird this is. Imagine how flipping awkward it's going to be when Wilbur gets home...though I try not to think about it...But seriosuly..AW!

Honestly, I read this fanfic out of pure curiosity considering I had just finished the movie and, before learning about their true relationship, I thought Wilbur and Lewis would make a cute couple. Before I say anymore I have to tell you that this was a very well-written fanfiction and, had it been any other pairing, I would have probably Favorited it. Unfortunately I can't get past the father/son incest in it though I was surprised that I wasn't as disgusted as I thought I would be. However, it still does not sit very well with me. You should keep writing though, I think you are very talented. This fanfic was cute and sweet... as long as the incest is ignored.

Aww I thought that was rather cute. I liked that it was sad but still sweet. Good stuff~

This was very good.

Aww :) Please write more of this couple! There isn't enough L/W out there

My first MTR fic! Very cute, sad it couldn't go on, though. I think it would be rather awkward when he goes back, cos his dad would surely remember! Maybe you should write that ;)

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