This was a great fic! Sledgehammar/Alyssa was my first otp from the game. (Well I like anyone/alyssa honestly.) I love how they were in character and it went with the original story. :) part of me wonders what would have happened if she said yes. Anyway, great story!

This was a great fic! Sledgehammar/Alyssa was my first otp from the game. (Well I like anyone/alyssa honestly.) I love how they were in character and it went with the original story. :) part of me wonders what would have happened if she said yes. Anyway, great story!

I have never read this pairing before but I really liked how you wrote it. I'm surprised that you haven't had any reviews. The characterizations were well done and you kept that predator mentality the whole way through. :D