Since Jade is trying to copy Miyako, does that mean that Miyako is a Mary-sue?

Mary-sues and Gary-stus are really annoying -.- Like, how can someone stand that?! "I'm perfect, I'm perfect!" yada, yada, yada! No one's perfect ya morons! Face it!

very nice i know is kinda late due to it being 5 years ago..but i wasn't really into this whole PPGZ thing until later,checking on some mary sue to do a parody,but anyways pretty good job,it was nicely detailed and the characters were well written, i am not a profesional writer but i can say that it was creative,and to be honest it was the first time i see a parody so yeah,anyways i don't want to waste any more of your time so i'll leave a quick rating which will be yeah i hope you read this ;-;

i really liked it! it was awesome and i think the last one was the best the only thing i need to know is ...how jade looks like? because i wish to know a better detail of said character,since she actually caught my attention

I Dont think jade can replace bubbles well cuz shes like BRAT from the PowerPUNK girls z no one can be more kind then bubbles or well Fluttershy from Mlp so anyway love the fanfic it was funny ,the powerpuff girls transform using there socks? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Ha! I love mary-sue parordys !

I know it's comlete but I don't care make chp 2

Hey this is my first time reading this and it's cool can u please make chapter two please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

I loved it! Hehe it was funny :D

oh my, i just wish you could just change thee name to something like... breanna. hhehehehe just beause my name is a (x but i am NOT like her.:P

I like the "u stoled my pizza," "u stoled my girlfriend!"

so awkward

i love it

and u

(as a friend)

...What can I say? This is pure utter GENIUS xD. I laughed so hard... The OC makes me feel like strangling her, man :'D. Haha, anyway, I love it, man xD.

AND BE PROUD OF "ADL:TMotR" D:!...Speaking of that fanfic, I need to catch up with it -3-;;;. ...Badly :'D

Demasiado buena esta historia tipo parodia... en serio Jade tiene un cierto parecido a Himeko

Salu2! Inspiracion!

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SSSSSSOOOOOOOOOO adding this to faves! PLEASE tell me you're doing more - I loved this. XD. If I was there, I would have told her "Okay, you can stop being a bitch now. One, you say you're really smart. You use words that don't even exist. Two, you say you're preppy AND tomboyish. Bullshit - they're complete and total opposites. So unless you're bipolar, or have multiple personalities, you can't be both. And thirdly - stop saying that you're perfect, because you aren't. By saying you're perfect, you're really pointing out that you obviously aren't. You're just being a bitch. Now shut the fuck up and deal with it."

XD.

I love how Himeko just calls in a bunch of old ladies... XD. Again - PLEASE update this or SOMETHING. This made me laugh. XD. Must have more. High school is torture, this makes it better. 83.

hey youre mexican right well im just going to write it in english to avoid confusions

well i must say that i like the way you described all the f*cking mary-sues and gary-stues my point is every goddamn person thinks that by putting stupid bitches and idiots who are perfect in avery f*cking way. God please i beg you to kill those brats and send their bodys and souls straight to hell because i cant stand all those stupid idiots.

Theyre all just the same and one of the worsts is that CAKEDECORATOR if you value your eyes, soul, body, face, lifes dont read her stories theyre pure shit.

Marinav92 im sorry for putting this critique on your story now i shall move on until that b*tch of CAKEDECORATOR strikes right on my ass, thanks so much for your time.