you're use of the chromosomes might confuse those not read up on it. but technically you wouldn't "delete" the part of the y chromosome that determines gender. Technically you'd add to it the whole reason it's called x and y anyways is because the x chromosome is longer which when you look at and xy their the same shape just x has slightly more to it. ANYWAYS the fox destroyed the Y chromosome so the Jutsu copied the X chromosome creating a female who has 2 IDENTICAL X chromosomes. The Uzumaki weren't known for having any debilitating genetic diseases like the Kaguya clan so that shouldn't hurt her but what it does mean is that if she has the marker for the Kongo Fusa then she has it on both chromosomes meaning she would most definitely have access to that unique chakra feature of her mothers. Speaking of genetic diseases the reason a lot of dangerous ones afflict males instead of females is that those defects are carried on the X chromosome and are recessive traits but are located in the strand that Y is missing which is what causes them to show up in someone when they are born. A male would then have to reproduce who has that disease with a woman who is a carrier for the disease for them to have a baby girl who has it.

I like the concept however Sasuke is acting way to ooc, and completely undermines his character and what we, the viewers, know of his character. You may want to add Sasuke bashing, as it clearly shows your bias against the characters.

Just read this and wow the concept of this story has me hooked. I added it to my favorites and followed it so that I won’t miss the next update whenever that might be.

I seriously can’t wait til Narumi hits Naruto with the patented talk-no-jutsu.

Nice concept

bu sice when did
sakura started calling kakashi kaka-sensei.(without any back story that was i think naruto called him). and I don't think sakura would have snapped at sasuke

I feel so bad for Narumi. Life has just done her dirty in all the worst ways.I hope it doesn't stay that way.

Narumi is sooooooo adorable. And the fact that Tsunade's all but her mother in the backstory they've crafted makes me excited for the fluffy bonding snippets I'm hoping you'll provide. With Shizune (and maybe Ayame) acting as older sisters and Tsunade herself filling the role of her mom, Narumi is gonna have the best time. Sure, it'll be a helluva adjustment from living on her own all her life, but I bet it's something she's only over dreamed of.

Must be nice.

I really like how you've started this. The idea of Naruko suddenly becoming a girl in this way is something I hadn't considered, and I think it could lead to a pretty interesting story. I'm a fan of the way you've portrayed her so far, and if her relationship with Tsunade turns more maternal that'll only make me happier.

I dislike Yami, though. His underhanded deceitful tendencies don't endear him to me at all. I'm hoping this story focuses more on Naruko and her exploits instead of following that other kid around.

I get that they're two sides of the same coin, but they're not my kids so I can't be blamed for having a favorite.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

awesome
sadly so slow...
awesome again
and nice idea

thte boy - the boy

Pls dont be Naruko pls dont be Naruko... They'd name the sibling menma after a ramen topping like They named Naruto.

I read your story 8 years ago when I was addicted with Naruto family centric fics (also when he gets a twin out of nowhere), I was intrigued by the concept of your story. In my memory, your story was well written so I only command you to continue your writing there. I read you have health issues on your profile, and I could only wish you a proper recovery!

Wow, 8 years between updates. Probably the largest in my alerts lol (And another reminder of how long I've been on this site ugh). I had fun rereading this and it's still very readable despite the age. I would cut down on the "girls should do/be this" stuff tho, the reaction will probably be more negative in 2019.

Thank you for continuing this and I look forward to future updates.

Not bad overall. I would have liked some girls night stuff. You do that kind of thing a lot better than you do action scenes. Character focussed rather than actio focussed i guess

Yeah the 'youre a girl now so you better get used to it' and 'you can never change you should just give up and be the gender your body says' is some gross ass transphobic bullshit there.