Reviews for Unmasked Slytherin
serenityselena chapter 1 . 5/10/2017
an interesting meeting/conversation :)
Autumn H chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Hard to follow. Revise it some, there are a lot of errors.
Audie S chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
The is crap. I mean, there are TONS of mistakes in the 3,191 words of yours. Seriously, did you even revise this before publishing?

Merlin help me, there are so many freken' bad HP stories out there and I AWLAYS run into them. Please look over a story before you post it. Or even, create a plot. And while you're at it, go to English class! Did you ever here of proper grammar?

You know, like- Your and You're

That was one of your main errors. Please revise this.
Hecate's Kiss chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I could so see this going farther. As a one shot its amazing though. Love it!
Ann Jinn chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Amazing story, and great character development for such a short story. Very interesting twist for Harry.
fanficfantasies chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Oh my gosh. I could just so imagine Harry doing that if he was a Slytherin. It makes so much sense. He has full control on all of the cards, so of course that's what he'd do. Nice!
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Great story.
sneaky lunitic spy chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Ha i can see snape doing that after everything he had learned
Welwitschia chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
This was REALLY good. Are you going to continue it?
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Love it! Now if he helps him!
bakapervert chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Good Read.
FRK921 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
I lvoe this story. It would be a GREAT beginning to a multi-chapter fic.
Therio chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Nice one. :)
123-321 chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
hehe, good job
TwoChromeStacks chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Loved it!
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