Umm, wow. I'm not quite sure what to say. I really don't like thinking that Raoh killed anyone, so I'm just going to pretend that conversation never happened.

Are you going to do more chapters?!

So I cried... you really can write amazing stories and even paint pictures with the chosen words. Thankyou for this! Even though it got me all worked up and emotional- made my night! And days to come- I kept searching for a continued story on this. I guess Im hoping for chapters of rehabilitation for Raph and The rest of the hamato family. Am I wrong to.. be hoping for tcest? Oh well hehe! Sending many heart and love from Sweden!

No, there's no way this really ends here! Noooo! Aww wow this was such a good story, honestly . Amazing, I loved it. And I'll read it again in a heartbeat

What the hell? I could've sworn I'd reviewed this...

I must appologise profusely for clearly having not done so, I think this is awesome. Poor Raph, he really went through hell in there, both physically and mentally. I was really disturbed by how you'd ended it too, because despite Leo saying Raph wouldn't be broken and that he'd get through this fine, it really didn't leave much evidence to convince me that would be true! So yeah, this one's been a it of a brain grater on me recently!

Absolutely unacceptable! I will not tolerate that ending because I want to know! What happens next, how will this scar our lovely Red? WHY THIS ENDING!

This was probably one of the sickest and most foul stories I've read in a long while, and yet it is also probably the best "torture-Raph" fanfics I have ever had the pleasure to read. Many times I wanted to jump into the story and tear off each and every one of that psycho's limbs, and then I would go to Raph and smother him with hugs and affection. You're obviously a great writer that really knows how to stir up emotion in your audience!

Awesome job on this. I really liked it a lot. I'm glad Leo and Raph reconciled.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Oh...

I honestly don't even know what to say. I almost cried. Erm, which is a complement, if it doesn't sound that way.

You caught Leo's voice really well and in some twisted kind of way I like the way you're writing Raph. Everything is /right/.

So, to sum up/shut up, you're doing a really great job. Keep up the good work :)

Heartbreaking; that's about all I can say.

Delirium will have us saying a host of strange things. I recall, when I was about 7 and battling a fever, I asked my dad to stop jumping around like a kangaroo.

He was standing perfectly still, but my fever-induced delirium told me he was hopping all over the place. Very strange.

Anyway, you've labeled this fic horror/suspense, and not tragedy/suspence or horror/tragedy. That, at least, encourages me that Raph may not die. Then again, you may be one of these authors who much prefers to surprise readers, just so the story affects them the most. Why ruin the ending, yes?

Well, you know I'll be waiting for your next update.

Great job!

Blessings,

Rene'

Wow poor Raph. Hopefully things will get better for him soon. :(

Great story! More please! :)

I know I'm a seriously sick sadistic butch, cos I am loving this Raph-torture! It's been ages since I read any of such high quality, and I'm enjoying this fic immensely!

Update soon please! :D

Wow, wicked chapter! I'm glad you kept going, cuz this was really awesome! D I'm really looking forward to the next bit!

Awesome job on this chapter. Poor Raph feeling the way he is. That's not cool. Great job on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,

Shell