to be continued

Fuck. You are making me emotional. This is an amazing story and you are a talented writer. Just remember that

Any hope of completing this story, even if just a short chapter to let Tony and Jethro move on? Thanks for a beautifully written story.

Ruined by killing shannon and kelly off im done sorry bot gonna continue to read now you've gone and fucked it up.

I love how you wrote Tony with Gibbs! I know this hasn't been updated in years but I hope someday you choose to finish the story!

oh wow that was a very well written story. I'm not crying not at all...oh who am I kidding I'm sniffling and there is small pile of tissues next to me. As for the ending I guess for this story it was just right. You could even write sequel to it later maybe. All the same this story was great.

this is such a wonderful story. But you should keep writting, give it a conclusion.

Plz update ssssssssssoon

So cute! I cant take it its adorable!

this story DESERVES an ending and a COMPLETION! lots of readers won't start reading a story that isn't marked complete. this one has sat, unfinished for way too long. Please consider finishing it, or marking complete (so we readers know you are done with it). thank you.

you've put WAY too much work into this one not to do the justice!

PUSSY PUSSY PUSSY MARAWANNA

Lovely story. I was crying there at the end. You should receive an award for having the best story with a young Tony and daddy Gibbs.

will there be anymore to this beautiful story? its such a great story and it deserves a ending!

Oh wow. What a mess. Poor Gibbs. Poor Tony. Amazing chapter. Update soon.

Actually since DiNozzo Sr is the reason Tony is this ill he can be sued in civil court and stand criminal trial regardless of whether he terminates his parental rights or not.