Amazing chapter.
I did notice debreese misspelled it is supposed to be spelled debris.
Please tell me there is going to be another chapter or at least a sequel.
The story can not end like this, there has to be more to the story.

oh my word. What an amazing chapter!
I think prowl is pregnant with twins because of the use of they-referring to the unborn sparklings.

I now ship starlit and bee. Quite a chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I really enjoyed the chapter. I did notice only one misspelling in this chapter:

1- in bee's view where it says he pleaded with her, I think you meant he pleaded to her.

Hope that helps!

Amazing chapter loved the way it ended in a dun dun dun sort of way.
While I was reading I found some misspelled words:
1 " watched from a cage within" correctly spelled within
2"Gah..." should be she pushed me right in the tanks- the same femme has two different personalities 3 "embedded into my processer for ever" forever is one word also any more is one word- anymore
4" I keep you up dated" updated is one word- updated also any way can be spelled either way- anyway or any way.
5" sideways must me here " me should be: be
6 Bees snarky comment should be: Bee's snarky comment
7 " though you were down for the count" though should be thought.

Hope this review helps.
- zombleangel

Amazing chapter.
some corrections I spotted while reading:
1- "lay down on you back with you head in my lap" should be lay down on your back with your head in my lap
2- "None of you are worthy of my present"s should be presence
3 "There is a tell" should be" there is a time.."
4 "workthere" should be two words "she was going to work there ..."
5 "but sire had to door off" should be taken the door off...

I can not wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work!

I liked the part where it says if he ever found that bot he'd offline him.

In the paragraph where it says " and yet he ended up he somehow ended up bonding with Jazz" erase the part "he ended up" this little snippet is not needed and can cause the reader to get very confused.

When the story changes to starlit's view and she said "I was back on Sideways ships" there is an extra s where the s is not needed, Sideways ships should be Sideways ship.

The first time bees view comes into the story he was explaining how he got clocked be in the chassis, the be should be me, so "Sideways clocked me in the chassis".
Also, glade should be glad she didn't...

That was all I could find in this chapter. Keep up the awesome work!

Cool chapter.
In the paragraph where it says "she will never listen to me" should become " she will never listen to me now!"
Jetfire and Jetstorm their speech seems off, is that the way they are supposed to talk?
Just curious
Keep up the great work!

Great chapter, even if it did have some creepy parts here and there. Can not wait for the next chapter.

Dun dun dun.. Oh boy bee is going to lose his patience.

Oh, my gosh, starlight realizes she has a crush on bee. so cute!

Good chapter. I hope this isn’t the end of the story. I was really enjoying it.
Hope there’s more

Wow, quite the chapter!

Great now i have a chill on who it might have been.
Dun Dun Dun...

I am surprised about the sire. whoever he is ,he is giving me the creeps!