This FEMALE OC isn't Harry Potter at all..She's pathetic and with how powerful you say her KG is, she was helpless to the RAPE if it did happen..For god's sake, she did nothing and just let it happen and if there was rape; she wouldn't be able to do shit with the "power" YOU SAID she has..Also, she's NO HP..She's just a useless OC that is pretty unlikable and does NOTHING to help Naruto or even add to the story..So far, it's just Canon! How lame!

7 years seems like more than a lull.

KEEP WRITING.

At some point you might want to acknowledge that both potential heirs of the Uchiha clan have been placed on the same team, very much putting all of the eggs in the same basket and hoping the sharingan-wielding clan gets smasked. Neither the coup nor the massacre have occured but its obvious something is still going on.
Speaking of the altered Uchiha clan history... was Fem!HP somehow involved? She's the only new variable that I'm aware of.
Also, where is Shishui? Is Danzo still using his eye to mind control/manipulate the village leaders?
Fem!HP's eyes are magical representations of death and time. Ultimate defense against Sharingan's genjutsu? Tsukuyomi is said to represent the "Spiritual World and Darkness". The Uchiha clan and their demonic eyes are completely overpowered. I'd love to see one of the arrogant bastards yank Fem!HP into their little torture world only to discover they've trapped themselves with her.

Interesting start.
Why bring in a Fem!HP character? So far the personality, powers, skills, etc. have been very different. No references to backstory. Just an OC influenced by a Goddess of Death.
Perhaps start referring back to original life more? Ex) she could enter into a meditative trance to consult with spirits of the deceased (her parents, Sirius, Dumbledore, Tobirama Senju, Mito Uzumaki, etc). Great counsel. Brillant minds. Quirky commentary. There are a lot of possibilities.
Does she have trauma/PTSD from original life? Harry was abused, manipulated, ignored, or publicly humiliated by most of the authority figures in his life. Perhaps reference more to explain/justify her current anti-social/sociopathic tendencies?
You mentioned the Hallows but we haven't seen them at all. So she can still perform spells from her original life? So many possibilities! Are her spells detectable by shinobi?
How different is chakra from magic? I know that the Sannin all reverse-summoned themselves to meet their ideal partners. It would be interesting to see what realm would match with a magical avatar of death. Mogwai? Phoenix? Thestral? Dementor?

Omg! This is good please update! And looks like the bat shit crazy Uchiha Gene is acting up again

So she is super powerful and lived two lives but cannot fight off Mizuki of all people? Sigh...whatever.

This is a really amazing story, that I honestly would just love to read more of and find out what you are planning on having happen next. So please keep this up and update again soon, because I can't wait to see just what you have planned.

Please, please update! I really want to know what’s going to happen. What everyone’s reaction will be to Sen’s kekkai Genkai. I love the different perspectives and hope to know what kakashi’s thinking - maybe the hokage too.

loved it hope you will update

please update, and please do Sen x Itachi

Hallo,
ich finde deine Story einfach nur Hammer.
Und es ist gut das du es auch von Itachis Sicht schreibst , sonst hätte man manchmal Problem zu verstehen wie er sich in der Story entwickelt. Auch Sen ist großartig geschrieben/gemacht.
Bitte schreib bald weiter auch wenn es so lange her ist.
LG Lucia

People, leave the author alone! The reason that Harry does nothing is because of the risk of exposure. If she does something out of the ordinary, literally the ones with power like Danzo, would make her into a breeding mare to clans. So, that is why she does nothing because she does not trust anyone for her secret to come out and she already have them watching her by having Itachi as her sensei and it clearly states her reason in the chapters. This story is great, so stop hating. I think this Harry is very intelligent by laying low and acting weak.

Girl, I'm not flaming you. Far from it actually. I'm just criticizing this chapter in general. Rape is a serious issue, I know. I have no qualms with authors using that in their stories. It is reality and a sin, so is murder, although rape is a graver sin that deserves no mercy, in my opinion. It is reality, and it happens, period.
I just believe that Mizuki would have achieved that in some other time, sure, but Naruto and Iruka simply can't stand there and watch that happen!

I just wish the scene was more blended out and his attempt seems very unnatural in the midst of him trying to make a grab for the scroll. Naruto was, and should be his main priority.

Sorry, just laying that out. That scene just annoyed me.

loved it please continue
wanna see sen grow up