Reviews for The Betrayal Of Harry Potter |
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llpi chapter 9 . 2/20 You mention “four” Gryffindor boys, but you killed off Dean Thomas in the attack on the Hogwarts Express, so that would leave just three: Ron (assuming he recovered), Neville, and Seamus. |
Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 9 . 2/20 Awesome chapter! I love that Harry snuck in to see Sev. |
DarkRavie chapter 9 . 2/20 I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
rowenasheir chapter 8 . 9/26/2015 Are you going to finish this story? |
Femalefan chapter 2 . 6/30/2015 The premise isn't bad, however you really need a beta or edit these chapters. |
thewolf74 chapter 8 . 7/7/2014 I love the fact that Harry is finally showing his true colors. I'm also happy that him and Severus got together. Please update again very soon. I want to know what happens next. |
GodofMischiefandChaos chapter 8 . 8/3/2013 I look forward to the new and hopefully improved chapter(s) |
Theladysadie chapter 8 . 7/20/2013 Wow! I don't usually try Dark!Harry, but you have really changed my mind! This is brilliant, and I can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
Apheral chapter 8 . 7/11/2013 Love this story |
Mashkai30 chapter 8 . 7/9/2013 Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing! |
10samantha242 chapter 8 . 7/3/2013 I hope everything turns up. i was wondering what snape's reaction was to potter's new piercings and tattoos and what they were. |
cyiusblack chapter 8 . 7/2/2013 like your story update soon |
fictionfangirl3 chapter 8 . 7/1/2013 I'm sorry you lost your stick. It sucks. I hope you find it soon and can post again. Good luck. |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/29/2013 The Betrayal Of Harry Potter is really good can't wait for the next chapter |
readermind chapter 7 . 6/30/2013 hope you update soon :D |