Reviews for The Betrayal Of Harry Potter
llpi chapter 9 . 2/20
You mention “four” Gryffindor boys, but you killed off Dean Thomas in the attack on the Hogwarts Express, so that would leave just three: Ron (assuming he recovered), Neville, and Seamus.
Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 9 . 2/20
Awesome chapter! I love that Harry snuck in to see Sev.
DarkRavie chapter 9 . 2/20
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
rowenasheir chapter 8 . 9/26/2015
Are you going to finish this story?
Femalefan chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
The premise isn't bad, however you really need a beta or edit these chapters.
thewolf74 chapter 8 . 7/7/2014
I love the fact that Harry is finally showing his true colors. I'm also happy that him and Severus got together. Please update again very soon. I want to know what happens next.
GodofMischiefandChaos chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
I look forward to the new and hopefully improved chapter(s)
Theladysadie chapter 8 . 7/20/2013
Wow! I don't usually try Dark!Harry, but you have really changed my mind! This is brilliant, and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Apheral chapter 8 . 7/11/2013
Love this story
Mashkai30 chapter 8 . 7/9/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
10samantha242 chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
I hope everything turns up.
i was wondering what snape's reaction was to potter's new piercings and tattoos and what they were.
cyiusblack chapter 8 . 7/2/2013
like your story update soon
fictionfangirl3 chapter 8 . 7/1/2013
I'm sorry you lost your stick. It sucks. I hope you find it soon and can post again. Good luck.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/29/2013
The Betrayal Of Harry Potter is really good can't wait for the next chapter
readermind chapter 7 . 6/30/2013
hope you update soon :D
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