So freaking confused

I know I suck I re read it and started to re think the story line and plot plus writting style. Their too Out of Character and yeah its really cheesey so since I'm not working on any thing and my days are extremely boreing I'm re doing it all course when I get the first chapter up again under a different name I'll leave a another review or just put it up as a chapter.

Sorry I suck at this.

~Blood Mina

You're pissing me off...How dare you take Storm's heritage from her? Hater.

I think it's very cheesy, and Raven's a fucking wimp. She's very out of character, not even close to her usual self. Altho I did like her boggart. Snape sucks.

idk if i like this story anymore u just cant kill raven! :'(

i think i might cry!

why does she have to die :(

Whoa... trippy. :p

Anyways, YAY YOU UPDATED! :D

I swear, I'm in school right now and I'm supposed to be doing work but when I opened my email and saw that you updated, I was like, "Screw work! I'm reading this!" You're just that amazing. :)

So that time turner thing is really confusing me. Its like, Raven's dead, but she's right there. -_-

This could be better... a lot better. But I'm not totally evil, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and read the next chapter.

I love this story, keep it up please!

awesome! now you can update again! Anyways update soon!

great job keep it up

This is an AWESOME story and i am looking forward to reading the next chapter (_)

Yay on updating and computer fixing!

Boo on writer's block.

Aww! *dies*

LOVE IT SO MUCH! THIS STORY IS AWESOME!