I really loved this HEA Harmione story. It was filled with trauma and drama, but it left me with a good feeling; something I needed today. Thank you for sharing!

nice

This is REALLY A GREAT story! Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us.
Tammgrogan

Please write more, I loved this story. it's amazing and I just wanted to keep reading.

Weasleys did not deserve forgiveness. Not that Harry and hermione need to stay pissed. Just cut those people out. There is no need to go forward. Drop bad people, find better ones. There are some things you shouldn’t have to forgive. And even if you do, there is no reason you must leave yourself open to it again in the future. Fool me once, shame on you, fool me twice, shame on me. How many times are you going to let Ron destroy things before you realize he is a toxic person. One dimensional being who is still 11 inside, but now with hormones. Respect drops just like a battered spouse who refuses to leave. After a point, I don’t feel bad for the person anymore as they choose to go back. I wash my hands of it

A Mirror scene like this is in "Blue Eyed Doe" by "InfiniteDragon" a Harry Potter/Lavender Brown story, where she was attacked by Greyback much like Harry in this story, both this one, and that one are good stories, and have a unique take on the whole wherewolf thing. Anyway excellent story, good mostly fluffy romance these always make for a good read, thank you.
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I think Harry would be better in another thing that auror if he wants to make a difference.

But I really love the fic!

Really nice
Please continue
Thank you

My first thought was 'to Australia? by bike? fly over the ocean? I can't even imagine how much time this travel will take, and aren't Hermione supposed to be willing to reunite with her family as soon as possiblethat's what she'd said to Ron?' And then there's that grammar… my eyes were literally slipping and tripping every other word. I'm not a native English speaker and sometimes I couldn't even figure out what the heck this random set of letters means? But in the end you totally made it up for me with your story and the ending was truly epic. Thank you for sharing, I definitely will read more of your writing.

im a huge fan of your writing, the end.

Id it just me or is it weird for her to talking about Harry inside to her parents? I mean come on a little explicit its kinds gross lol but great story

Interesting story; I really hate this Ron though...

I love this story and this concept too. While I'd have liked to have more to read I think where u ended it was smart. Perhaps an epilog detailing all that happened and how long it took and when their children were born that sort of thing. I really liked that last line and I would have liked to know how the telecommunication came to be. Also I know u mentioned it in ur an but I have to say, when that first started I was very confused and suggest u use some apostrophes to denote telepathic speech if u ever reformat the story or add to it.

Done.
Re: A/N ch 6- I will definitely agree this is better than JKR's ending and epilogue.
(it almost couldn't HELP but be better)

'Hope I wasn't 'too' grammar nazi, vocab nazi, whatever... that stuff really DOES detract from good read, though, and this and the other fics of yours I've read really COULD be good, if they were cleaned up a bit.
(the content, if that's what you call it... the story itself... IS GOOD.

It's all that stuff that came back on my papers in RED marker, that cost me letter grades, here and there. More than ONE missed comma...a letter grade off. Miss-spell a word... a letter grade off.

(you would never put up with it in a book you purchased, so why not strive for better when YOU are the one controlling it) Can you imagine reading Tolkein or Ann Rice and thinking... "Man this is really good fiction, but they make alot of mistakes, and it's hard to read with all that crap messing it up in there."
JKR's books (every one of them) were done a year before they were released 'cuz there was so many mistakes, reversals, all that sh**, TEAMS of editors had to fix it before printing.
I haven't tried it yet, but I swear, that DRAGON speech recognition software has got to be better than what most people are using for this fan-fic stuff.

"A post humorous Snape trial"... 'Ridicules fan mail'

Is there even a small chance you 'might' have been trying for 'posthumous'? And for AT LEAST the tenth time this fiction, ridiculous?!

Maybe a good rule is, if you don't KNOW a word (what it means, how to spell it, how to use it in a sentence), then don't USE the word.