Interesting. Its written, I imagine, just like a delirious persons train if thought would be. Well done

Ooh, I like this story. Nice flashback to what Biggs meant to Luke- sort of a reminder that he was thinking of the people that he'd lost, even though the movies don't exactly do the greatest job of showing it. The POV has a tendency to hop from head to head, which threw me out of the story a little, but overall it was very entertaining.

Simply is also very convincing, with a touch of delirium.

Excellent! Bravo! This was absolutely magnificent! I loved how you portrayed the younger Luke, and how you based his perspectives. Marvelous job, once again.

That was a great story of what Luke 'might' have been thinking. Have you thought about doing it for other parts of his life? (Endor, 2nd Death Star, or even during one of the SW novels...just an idea ;)