Harry and Sirius find out that they have lordship heritage, immediately start talking in horribly formal language. Harry seemingly knowing just what to do and say despite no former experience, even before putting on the ring, even when by all rights he should have been asking for directions like the clueless muggle raised 90's kid he is.

Harry randomly has his mother's wedding ring, that he obviously pulled straight out of his arse, cause no one gave it to him, and he never went to a vault. So I guess its just been in his possession for the past 14 years.

Neville learns of Harry accepting his heirship within MINUTES of it happening. Guess he's a seer here. That or the goblins just really could not wait to tell anyone and decided to call Neville first.

Neville, instead of going to his Gran to get him out of unwanted marriage contracts, contacts Harry who literally only got his inheritance like five minutes ago.

Other than these completely random leaps of logic, I'm enjoying this story. Good job.

Ok short chapter more please

Great start

For once, it isn't JUST Harry that is blessed with Multiple Witches in Romantic Pursuit. Still, this is New to Neville - no wonder he is asking for Harry Help.

I'm sorry, but I could only go so far in this story before I got frustrated with Harry's abrupt, out-of-nowhere, knowledge of how to act like a pureblood when a) He isn't one; and b) He wasn't raised like one. You could have put the change down to wearing the head of house ring that came imbued with all the knowledge required for a pureblood head of house, but you chose not to do that and the change is jarring.

We were also led to believe that Harry is in love with Hermione, as he tells her so repeatedly. If he is in love with her, it should be safe to say that he fell in love with her as is and would have loved her as is if the prospect of having to marry other girls wasn't there. Even if the reason for choosing to marry those other girls was a very "Harry" reason, once the idea became a reality, he really turned on his "Lord Potter" persona and Hermione went from being someone Harry loved as she was to being someone that had to change to make the plural marriage work. Suddenly, Harry goes into his "Lord Potter" persona and in order to avoid losing the boy/man she loves, Hermione reluctantly agrees to change everything about herself, everything that Harry fell in love with to begin with, to make the plural marriage, a marriage that Harry didn't have to agree to, work for everyone else.

You just have too many people out-of-character for me to enjoy this story anymore. I can handle Dumbledore and Weasley bashing and I really enjoy when it's done right, but you should have included Hermione bashing in your description because that's basically what happens once the ideal of a plural marriage is agreed upon. I don't enjoy Hermione bashing and I really don't enjoy it when it's suggested that she and Harry are going to be the main pairing of a story.

I don't like giving negative reviews, but I can already see that this isn't going to be a fic that I'm going to enjoy and having read reviews for the later chapters, I am even more convinced that I'm not going to enjoy it. Arrogant Pureblood Lord Harry and Neville and browbeaten Hermione doesn't work for me in a story, especially one that is supposed to have humor.

Good

Please finish as these are good stories

Griphook (who Harry knows) drops his current assignment to fetch his ultimate boss - that means that at least three goblins OTHER than Griphook smell Dead Fish - Ragnok himself, Griphook's immediate boss, and at least one other goblin. (Notice that I said at LEAST three - it could be a general alert to every goblin in the bank - if not every goblin and half-goblin globally. Half-goblins? We all know of at least one - Filius Flitwick. If there is one, there are doubtless others.)

Cool story. I thoroughly enjoyed it

Please write the next chapter alreadyavorit. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

REALLY ENJOYING THIS SO FAR!

MORE MORE MORE...PLEASE ;D

I love it so far and hope for an update sooner than later

Update

I loved reading this story I hope you update and finish this at some point in the future :-)

more please