Hey there,
Your story is amazing.
The ending was unexpected, because we all thought Percy would make it out, too. Your writing is awesome! It was all emotional and one thing that you don't normally see in too many fics: realistic.

Good job!

VBW

It good.

You are such an amazing author! You don't have long explications, but it's to the point, in a good way :)

Wow!I usually ignore most of the Percabeth if it doesn't have Thalico, but wow.
It was intense and angsty, and I nearly cried.
Keep writing, because I love your style of writing.
Did Micheal have a crush on Annabeth?
Maybe you could write a Thalico story, which I'll definately love,
but if you don't supportbthat pairing, or are not interested,
that's okay, too.
Thalico_RULZ

Love it. 3

HOOOOOOOLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYY CCCRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPP
THAT WAS AMAZING.
for a second, I was sure Percy was going to live. But, then he...didn't. But, it added to the story, and made it much more realistic.

Fantastic job.

really good, keep up the good work!

Hi! I loved your story, but you should change your title to "All You Need is a Spark". Also, I think that Annabeth and Percy should've both won like in the book. Other than that your story was great.

T.T

wow. that was great.

This is a great story, but i wish to see Annabeth stronger and braver, and more of Percabeth

Good story, but I'm kind of PO'ed that Annabeth was kind of cruel and you killed off Percy, or had him kill himself off.

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I hate to cry. I find myself crying when I read a death very, very often, though... And I say I'm not emotional. Snorts.

The ending sucked! It's not because I hate Annabeth, or anything, but I just like Percy SO much. I thought you were going to go for one of the following:

1. Have another tribute win and have Annabeth and Percy die together.

2. Have Annabeth win but never get over Percy's death.

3. There was a three, but I forgot it because of the crying thing.

Of the two, I thought two was the most likely, since Annabeth was the narrator and is she died, you would have the rest of the game unexplained. Even if only one other tribute remained.

I wished, for a brief, BRIEF, moment that you would make them both win like Peeta and Katniss (that was when I realized that Percy was one of the tributes and not a previous Victor from District 4, as I originally thought you were going to squeeze in Percabeth... then I saw the tragedy tag and it all made sense). Besides, it would have sucked to replicate the original's ending, and you knew that.

Oh, I just remembered three! I thought you were going to have Percy and Annabeth commit suicide and have the Capitol not be fast enough to stop it. But that would have included some romance around the middle of the fic, which you didn't insert there, so it doesn't work. Also, this story was very fast-paced, which meant that stopping for a long conversation or shameless flirting would make the people reading go AWWW then roll their eyes because you broke the flow of the story.

I thought two was the only likely choice. And then you talk about ARCHITECTURE, like I CARE. She's never supposed to get over Percy death! In general, you say in the last chapter that she's broken because of the arena. There's almost no emphasis on Percy. You were probably trying to go for that, and I know I'm ranting at you and probably making you angry because I'm, in many different ways, telling you how you should have ended your story. Which pisses most writers off.

But you made me cry... so we're even?

BTW, why was Percy so interested in Annabeth? Only because she was pretty?

This whole story was REALLY, SUPER GOOD! I think I actually started tearing up at the end when we found out how Percy died. I like to imagine that when Annabeth dies eventually, the two of them will become something more in Heaven. Great story!

OKKAAAAAYYYY. Let's see. I'm just going to make this review for the story as a whole, okay? :)

I love your writing style. It's very…sincere, and it has a touch of humor in it, even at the sad parts. The way you started your story was really neat, especially since you started it off similar to the way the 'Hunger Games' started. :D

Also, I liked how you incorporated the two PJO characters in here without making them seem out of place.

I also liked how you introduced important characters somewhat slowly so that we weren't overwhelmed with them.

And…I cried at the end, I really did :( It was…just so sad!

You did a really brilliant job with this, and it really deserved that award! You deserve a pat on the back! :D