C'était tellement magnifique. Tu as fait un travail excellent bravo pour ça, vraiment.

Its fantastic but i cant stand the ending plz make a sequel

(I'm Sirrius The Moonblade on this site)
Bravo! very nice indeed :)! I read your 'Captain Ussops...Plan" and thought it was really good too! Your wroting style is awesome and so are your ideas. I havent really read most your OP stories (the highest rating i read is T, plus I am trying to avoid spoilers. a diff. story alerted me that Ace is going to die, but luckily I don't know how.) I am currently on the Skypiea arc of the manga.
looking forward to any other LuNa onesjots/stories you write. Best of luck!

make a seaqul

i want a sequel, it's just not fair ending it here

beautiful..

Lovely.

This was a sweet and lovely story. There was a lot feeling into this story as Luffy stayed by Nami's side despite all the protests from the crew. It showed a lot of depth with the kindness Luffy radiates towards his crew. This makes me wonder if someone was at death's door and the one they love stayed by their side, would that lead them away from it? It seems like a logical question, but yet it might seem impossible. But then again, there is nothing impossible in this world. I think you portrayed that quite well here. A wonderful story in my opinion that showed a lot of love, faith, and hope. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed reading this! :)

That was so beautiful :D I am actually glad you didn't make Luffy say anything to Nami, when she woke up... it would have just ruined the moment. That one smile was telling more than words ever could. Also, I just can't picture Luffy as a guy who says 'I Love You's' to his beloved. He has a special way of showing it, IMO.

Thanks, for this story!

awesoem story!

This is so fluffy and adorable, other than the whole Nami almost dying stuff, but whatever! This is a great piece of writing!

Hi

Ok not only is this story amazingly sweet in it's own right, but I was reading it while listening to "Get up" by Barcelona.

It made me kinda cry a little, ok I know I'm a crybaby when it comes to stories like your's.

Defo going to favs _

xxx

This story was so good! And two months is nothing. That means you took your time and really worked hard on it. I took half a year on one whole story! I'm new so my stories aren't on here. Any way, this is what love is about! Lol. I give this story an 9! Make more and it doesn't matter how long it takes. If you work longer that means it's better. :)

L-love it :')