Oh my gosh! This is a very good start. Are you still gonna update this?

It seems very interesting but you are not going to finish it, right? That is sad...

Omigod so cool! I'm only saying that cuz Sakura won. What is your first language? If you don't mind me asking

Please, please, please update really soon. I love your stories and think they are really good. Can't wait for more.

Okay, who taught you how to write a story? This is very poor quality. I’ve spotted multiple spelling errors and glaring grammar mistakes. Don’t even get me started on the way you write the characters. They are so out of their scope of personality that this very piece of writing is an insult to both the original creator and the characters themselves. Learn how to break up a paragraph. Educate yourself on do’s and don’ts of fanfiction writing. Get a beta reader (you obviously need one). Do your god**** research on a topic before putting the idea to paper. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, LOOK UP HOW TO WRITE A GOOD FANFIC!

Literally, from the first sentence of your summary and story I can tell if a fic is going to be shitty or not. I’ve read so many awful stories that this sense of mine has been sharpened to a T. Your story is clichéd. I’ve read so many other terrible fics with the same plot line as yours. Talk about unoriginality, much? Seriously, the only people who bother to read and review stories like this are the ones who can’t write worth a sh*t either. An excellent story gets long, detailed, concrit and praise. A sucky fic like this only gets one-lined reviews and incomprehensible squeals from immature readers who can’t tell the difference between a good fic and what dung beetles make for lunch.

sasuke is in love with her right

Update

OMG! I SOOO CAN'T STAND KARIN RIGHT NOW! wait...what m i talking about? i NEVER could stand her before! I HATE HER! and this chapter gives me an even more reason to hate her! lol but very very very good story plz update soon!

Roar! I wanna know more! T_T

Why did you end it there it was getting good

Seriously? when are you going to update? it's been sooooo many months! please update, cos we're just getting to the main part...

omg I love this fanfic please please please make more

It was good, but you had way too many run on sentences, and too many mistakes in general. If you reuploaded the story, it would've been nice for you to go back and correct your mistakes. This chapter was hard to read.

I do have a feeling of deja vu... But not from reading this story but from another called 'that Damn Neighbour' by Shellzonfire. This first chapter reminded me a lot of it and I though she actually updated for once, but was then thoroughly disappointed because that damn neighbour os one of my all time favourite stories and In all honesty this story does not hold a candle to the afore mentioned.

I recommend that anyone reading this should at least take a look at that Damb Neighbour by Shellzonfire one. Promise you it's worth a read because the development and character portrayal is much more defined and suitable. And for goodness sale it has a kpop reference in the first chapter let mr go die of happiness !

Kay I'm sorry for ranting but you really got my hopes up ... But then crushed them ... Sooooo I'm serious though when I say you should invest in a beta reader

ughhh sakura is stupid for helping ino !