wahh i love the end,"the world can see you baby"my god, so hot this story

very nice fiction! XD Seriously hot indeed...OwO

Loved that last line. ;) Jin's such a sweetheart, in his own way.

Other than that, this was just lovely~

great ending line, made me smile (something greatly needed today)

sorry it took me so long to read this one, i've a huge backlog of emails from to get through :S

liked it very much

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Ahem...

Sorry about that; after I read the last sentence I was wiping my drool off my keyboard.

I couldn't sleep so I decided to read some of your fan fics *wink*

Now I can assure you I will have sweet dreams...

Really sexy. :D

Aww...this is so nice. As in, sweet. I'm not some kinda perv or anything. *shifty look* lol.

I am in love with this.

I wish I could expand on that point and write a review of value, but I'm pretty much in awe.

'He absently minded the fingerprints he was leaving on the unblemished glass'

- I don't know why I completely adore this line but I do; it's amazing.

'The panorama had become more stylized. The spectral abundance had moderated to an interplay of midnight blue, headlights, and street lamps: an image of a starry night on Earth. Streams of cars passed by in their controlled, orderly fashion, dividing onto lanes just before the building as if adhering to a virtuoso choreography. People were driving them—real people, Hwoarang realized.'

- This has got to be my favourite. It's literally stunning; rather than read it you're transported there.

Well, damn.

In case you hadn't quite got my point: I LOVE THIS.

It's so MARVELOUS! OUTSTANDING STORY! Your writing are really GREAT.

So lovely the way Jin caressing Hwoarang :D

We love imagine what they do XD

Keep writting great story :)

You do understand that it's mean to post awesome things when people are working on thesis papers? But this is still awesome so you're excused.

Oh my.

This was seriously beautifully, carefully, hotly written. Your writing crackled with a animation and lustly honed tenderness that was intoxicating and rich, but never lacking in a bizarre delicacy. The city's poetry, Salysha. Never have I read such a sensory, sparkling weaving of the world behind the glass that Hwoarang observes; executed with a flow and clarity that is enviable. Hwoarang's mix of vulnerablity and trust in Jin is oddly touching, and a lovely element to include. A simply fabtastic moment in time between this accomplished couple. Simply gorgeous.

-is red in the face with blushing- Holy Crap I didn't expect this!

This story was so cute! When not in school I have to ge read the one on I mean It was just so cute!

I simply loved: "It's breathtaking," Hwoarang said.

"So are you," Jin murmured and kissed his shoulder - I awed that and read it again beacuse it jsut made me go awh! The girl next to me looked at me weird too.

This story was beauitful, breathtaking and if it were hugable I would be squeezing it! Thank you so much~!

-read the one on AFF again, like a boss-

'In the dark, eye contact never faltered throughout the wordless exchange.' - Gorgeous.

'moving like a shadow across the room,' - Also gorgeous.

“It’s breathtaking,” Hwoarang said. / “So are you,” Jin murmured and kissed his shoulder. - D'AW! D'AW D'AW D'AW.

'He absently minded the fingerprints he was leaving on the unblemished glass,' - Probably my favourite line. EPIC.

'Hwoarang found that his lips were forming words on their own volition: Hai... hai... hai...' - I won't lie. That was hot. Very hot.

“The world can see you, baby.” - SO WAS THIS.

Hot hot hot as always ;D