Just thought I'd post a review for this, because it seems to have not got anywhere near as many as it deserves, and it's really good. This is damn near perfect and I daresay good enough to have been published, and I kind of wish I had something a bit more constructive to add, but I don't.

Still, I'll definitely be following this, and this is fantastic work.

impressive I would like to see this go on.

Still love this story, its brilliantly well written. Love it :D Keep it up!

Nice little contained story here. got a little confused with Zachary's story there; but that was me, not you, so no worry in style. Here's hoping for a wrap up chapter, though I definitely can understand why these would take a while to formulate.

Gotta love Emile

Well...that was actually really good! Just, I hope you don't make the Marines suck. Ya feel me?

I'm looking forward to more of this fic.

Interesting.

signed the good dr.

This is an amazing piece of work. Are you planing on writing more? Because I sure hope so! It was fantastic and I really want to know where you would take this :).

Very well thought-out and meticulous. You've certainly done your homework with some of the character backgrounds as well. I see a bright future ahead, not only for this story but also for your skill as a writer. Keep it up! Thanks for posting!