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One of the most interesting things I had after finishing this story is how you could see Malcolm and Liadan slowly healing and how their feelings changed and settled about Morrigan. What I didn't enjoy is how after they finally got together, there was so much guilt around that relationship, guilt about betraying her people, guilt about him taking her away from her people. I just could process that they could be together in a healthy way without fixing that part of their relationship.
Great second part! :D

Yeah, at this point I'm done. This story looped into stupid a long time ago. It's quite a shame because initially it was quite good - but frankly anything other than annihilating Astrid and the Orlesian Templars who tried to attack them is just stupid at this point.

Frankly I don't see the logic. Put a blanket fucking bounty on all of them and mysteriously they'll start dropping like flies. Seriously, there are TONS of very well trained assassins as well as idiots who might get lucky.

"and then both of our heros died of hypothermia after "frolicking" too long in the storm, the end" would have been a rather funny and realistic consequence of the events of this chapter

whatever happened to eamon seeing reason and retireing? though it admittadly does make for some nice drama

your cliffhangers arent that effective if i can predict their result a few chapters in advance...

the timing seems a bit off on the touching reunion, though the reunion itself is well done

im just going to call it right now that that "little old lady" is flemeth, and im fairly sure she's also malcoms character development raven too

so thats what sten and malcom have been up to, its good to see that the prince took the sensible path instead of wandering off after morrigan

i knew that fiona's untainetedness was going to come back in a big way, i somehow suspect she wont survive her second joining

astrid's death seems like a waste of a good antagonist, but it seems to have served the purpose of putting malcom in a position to encounter his old-flame or at least his bastard child

it seems like everyone has to make sacrifices, though it would be cool to see malcoms perspective on all this

it seems like astrid isnt even letting malcom stop in highever to pack his bags...

so malcoms headed to orlais, and i wonder what the dwarven succession crisis will entail?

wait, why did they send velanna in when wynne was already attempting a rescue?

that should be an interesting development, i suppose its for the best that nobody mentioned their breif sojourn in the fade with the sloth demon?