This is a very moving story and you should do more of 1s like this

good story but need a bit more maybe another chapter maybe about why Kari leaves something like that

I really enjoyed this, I think you did both characters perfectly (as always) I can't wait for more updates from you :D x

Such a sad story (in the begining), poor T.K

The ending brought much joy!

Great oneshot, thank you for writing it )

Great story. It shows how important Kari is to TK. I'm glad everything worked out in the end

I would be really scared if some random person I hadn't seen in months was randomly in my house without any sort of admission from anyone XD

Though a bit unrealistic(I could see TK doing that if he were really hurt, but I can't see Kari breaking and entering XD), it was really cute. One bit bugged me though: They can hold their breath for a LONG time if it "only" took a few minutes till the need for air interrupted. Other than that it was great. The punctuation, grammar, spelling and structure were flawless as far as I could see!

Can't wait for more L&S: Resurrection, either :) What's the hold up, huh?

I think that this was a great story, especially how you describe emotion. Poor T.K...I'm glad they worked it out in the end.

Really great writing my friend, poor TK, he sure was destroyed, same with Kari but in the end all went fine for the both of them