dude dude, one advice UPDATE NOW OR I WILL 4KIN TRACK UR PC AND HAUNT U DOWN TO THE END OF UR GRAVE!

up date! or ill lock you in a room with duckbut-sammas fas girls

KONOHAGAKURE NO SATO! NOT "KONAHO" OR WHATEVER THE FUCK YOU WROTE...

an update would be nice

Ahhhhhhh!dam the cliffhangers!

Still sad hahaha

So sad...

I searched n searched n I saw how this story has a good amount of reviews so here I am enjoying this story m so far it's good

Please update soon! Fallen-chan out! -

UPDATE!

This story is quite good. The level of emotion and drama going on is well done.

Unfortunately this still needs work. You have mispelled several words repeatedly and have used wrong words in some sentences, an example being; 'Dynastic' instead of 'Diagnostic' during the chapter Tsunade was checking over Naruto.

I would recommend getting a beta reader if you don't already have one, and if you do, to go over it again once you get it back. This has the potential to be a marvelous story once finished. Good luck with the rest of the story.

can't wait for the next chapter loved it! So when Naruto said that 'I know what it's like to have something sacred taken by force.' did that mean he was rapped?

I Love your story, but if you could write Konoha right...

to be honest,this is how i always wanted the whole naruto seris to be sakura and sasuke leaving together etc,naruto hating sasuke and stop trying to go after him,because its a waste of time.

i really like how the story is going so far.

and what Jiraiya said about ino made me laugh :)

so please continue

i have nothing against naruhina,but i really hope it ends in naruino

great story btw