would have loved to see you continue this.. good story..

I really hope you don't end it here, I was really hoping to see how there relationship would be like in Hoenn :c

ummmm one question, is the story finished? or will we see Ash go after Dawn in Hoenn?

ok make a chapter where they reunite

Cute store. I think it deserves a sequel.

nice story. too bad it's already completed. calling for an encore

Beautiful! WOOOOO! GO PEARL! Nice one-shot, it's going on my favorites.

I'm a pearlshipper and this is great. But i don't think that ash will go back to hoenn anymore.-_- too bad.

But dawn! Dawn MUST GO to