I think the implications in this one were a bit too subtle, I almost didn't pick up on it. But I get it, I think. And Sam couldn't have seen what was coming, huh? This was. great insight to how she was feeling about it, though. Nice work.

Great story, love it

Wow, that was great! Haha. Loveeeeed it! :DDD

HAHAHA, Sam is so negative. Good job, very accurate and very funny, good job.

" School sucks, everything sucks"

Wow...just wow. This story is perfect for iSAFW. You wrote this perfectly with great tension. I'm hoping for some development but whatever happens,happens. Continue writing! Seddie! :)lol

Well, damn!

Isn't this just a hidden slice of perfection in a pool of mediocrity?

I loved every single word. The simplicity, the flow, the tension you created with such ease. It has this amazing smooth quality yet I could still feel the build up and tension. That text back from Freddie, I didn't even have to read the paragraph afterwards to get the inflection he was trying to give Sam. That's just bloody genius!

The way you ended it, with no real answer but still so full of hope and promise... yeah I grant you with genius status yet again.

Please keep writing, we'd be lost without authors such as yourself.

Exactly!

BTW: Pie girl turned me onto you... glad she did. I wonder what other stuff you've done... guess I better go find out! :)

You know what? You are very quickly climbing your way up my all time favourite Seddie authors list :D This, like iDuel, was god damn perfect. I don't wanna rant on about how in-character it was or anything like that. The fact is it was so simple it was BRILLIANT. It wasn't over-written or overwrought with angst; it was totally in keeping with the show and realistic to life. During the texting scene at the end I could literally feel the tension; I'm not even lying. That's how good it was. See? I'm totally gushing now but you just made my day :D I'm also completely in agreement about iSAF. Realistic expectations and we can't go wrong :)

PS. You're a Misty/Ash shipper? I thought I was the only one old enough on here to remember them. Screw all this new fangled pokemon crap :D

This is good! :D :) Great stroy!

nice, good word choices, realistic, uhhh... wow, I'm a writer and I can't think of any more descriptive stuff.

But I enjoyed, so bravo!

Loved it! :)