I'm very invested in this story. It's so well-written and engaging. I love your work, and hope desperately for an update. Thank you.

Update please

Wtf where is chapter 17. My lonely soul craves fan fictions and this story has ruined me because it has stopped at chapter 16 dammit. The writing is beautiful and was getting really good. I have mixed emotions of sorrow and anger. Thanks so much for the fucking mood swings. It was too beautiful ;-;

This story is beautiful so beautiful I cannot wait for more

Read through all of the chapters today and was totally pleased with the writing and characterizations. It is hard to find someone that can write a female lead that is totally badass and captivating, without it being too OP or perfect. I would love for you to write a Skyrim fic :D Great fic and hope you update super soon :D:D:D

Okay. I just started reading this not too long ago (about an hour or so ago) and ... I absolutely LOVE this story so much! Lucien is a character in the Elder Scrolls series I am most fascinated with, and I am pleased to see that this is an interesting, indulging, and wonderful story. I enjoy reading about Celeste, and her past is indeed very dark. I love your Vicente, and Lucien is just ... Lucien. (I'm not ashamed to say that I have a crush on Mr. Lachance ;). I like where this story is going. You're writing is very lovely to read, and I can't wait to read what happens next! :D

EXCUSE ME WHILE I FALL OVER AND DIE TO WORSHIP YOUR BLESSED SOUL FROM THE DEPTHS OF HELL. Thank you so much for updating this, you don't know how much this means to me. Leaving it at "The night he came to see me was the last night he lived." was torture for me, I want you to know that. You restored my faith in haitus-induced fics, you git. Oops, not offensive my friend, an endearment if you must. I'll go read now okie thank you thank you mmkay thanks bye.

Finally... great!
I have been reading your story through periods of time when I needed inspiration for my own fanfic (I've stolen your idea to drop Lucien into Oblivion, you know :P) aaaaaaaand... YOU FINALLY UPDATED! I'm so happy I could just tear out your intestines and strangle you with them! :D
Thank you, seriously.

Oh that's quite scary... I read this fanfic like 2 years ago, okay? First one I read about LL, too, and I instantly thought it was great. And I haven't really read any fanfiction in a while, and I haven't played the Elder Scrolls games that much either lately. And I certainly haven't thought about/seen/heard of Lucien Lachance in like a year either because of this. Then today I had a dream about the Oblivion TDB and Lucien was in it and I remembered it quite clearly because it was more vivid than any of my usual. And then now, after many years of hiatus, this pops up! I don't know, call it coincidence, but it's certainly a very strange coincidence! Sorry for that being somewhat unrelated to the content of the fanfic, but I just had to write that because it's quite awesome
As for the story, I haven't read the new chapter yet, but I think the story in itself is great and with a lot of character-involving scenarious which I personally like very much in a story. So I'll definately enjoy this new chapter!

No. No. No no no no no. No. I know this has been updated like 3 years ago, but it's so goood I can't let go of it and I always check to see if it has updated and I know this fic is as good as dead but pleeease.

I'll fall over and die now.

juwevfkajbhewfclkjbflkjwnefk l Noooo you have to come back and update! Just when it was getting good, my friend. It's so well done and intriguing and aeliudfliwe. I know this isn't a good review but please update when you can.

Please update! You can't leave such wonderful story unfinished!

"The night he came to see me was the last night he lived."

You can't just leave it like that and NOT UPDATE for FOUR months! Ugh this story is so good it is painful! I love it and I can't wait to see where it goes! Your PC is very well written and decidedly not a Mary-Sue, which is a breath of fresh air. I look forward to your next update which will hopefully be very soon, yes? :D

Update, please. This story is too good to be left unfinished...

I don't know if you were planning on writing more chapters, but it would be really cool if you did. Lucien and Vicente were my favorite characters in the game, and your story was a perfect match as far as the story I was looking for.

If you don't write more, I will fall over and die. ;)

So please to be writing more!